Even If You Never Love Me, Chapter 4

Jul 05, 2011 18:39

Rating: M 
Genres: Angst, Romance, Drama 
Warnings: Mild sexual situation. That "M" rating will come into play in the future, I promise.
Spoilers: Up through Special Education 
Disclaimer: I don't own Glee.
Author's Notes: This is my original plot, guys! No prompts required! Big deal for me... 
Summary: Kurt didn't immediately fall in love with Blaine. ( Read more... )

even if you never love me

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xo_oldgreggory July 6 2011, 03:31:25 UTC
Ohhhhhh youuuuuuu! *raises fists to sky*
I UGHHHHH, hahaha~
JSYK I will be waiting by the computer for an update from you XD
This chapter was sosososo good~

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soblonde1202 July 9 2011, 03:43:24 UTC
Thank you! I hope the wait wasn't too long! Honestly, knowing someone is actually anticipating more of my writing puts me over the moon, so thank you (again) for reviewing.

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many_a_dream July 6 2011, 05:52:16 UTC
Blaine's aching loneliness feels so raw... Wonder why Kurt didn't pick up on how empty the mansion must feel to Blaine (and his own self) now that he is there in person...

Interesting storyline. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

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soblonde1202 July 9 2011, 03:46:15 UTC
Hmm, intriguing point. Because I didn't think of it? Hah! I think Kurt doesn't pick up on the loneliness because he's so caught by the impressiveness. Mansions are huge, so they always feel empty and silent. Maybe he was so focused on planning his "talk" with Blaine? Maybe he's a little self-absorbed. This has me thinking! I always like character motivations (and want to use it in future writing), so I'm going to mull this over for a while. Anyway, thank you for reviewing, and I hope the next chapter is to your liking. And, that you might have another interesting point to get me thinking afterward.

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amordemealma July 6 2011, 06:34:07 UTC
HOLY COW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FIX IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FIX IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I DEMAND YOU MAKE THEM BETTER!

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soblonde1202 July 9 2011, 03:47:55 UTC
Hahahahah! Awesome use of text shouts. I write so angsty, right? How about, it gets better? Can I just snag the national quote for gay youth for my own story? You think they'll notice?

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smooshysushi July 6 2011, 20:59:13 UTC
Oh, Blainers. Think before you talk, honey. Or just don't drink. Ever.
You write Blaine so well, seriously, it's insane. He's so realistic this could be a scene from Glee. But BLAINERS, you idiot. I felt like punching him a little :( although Kurt did overreact a little...nah, I probably would have reacted like that anyway, lol :)

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soblonde1202 July 9 2011, 03:50:55 UTC
I honestly didn't know I wrote Blaine true to canon. It's not like I wasn't trying my hardest, but having you tell me it's like a scene from the show has me happy dancing. (Now, I'll have to try even harder, since you might expect it. :-D ) I had the same reaction to Kurt's blow-up. I was wondering if he over-reacted, but felt he might be prone to such instances, and went back and forth. It was that blow-up scene that came to mind while I was daydreaming (I work retail, so that happens a lot) which led to this story, so I felt I owed it more justice than the rest of this.

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seanix00bs July 7 2011, 00:34:24 UTC
oh! what?! no!!!
next part please!!

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soblonde1202 July 9 2011, 03:51:18 UTC
Hah! Next part is up! Thank you for reviewing. :)

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