Comments | soapboxblues: lost drabble: the dice were loaded from the start (jack/juliet)

angeldylan628 in soapboxblues

lost drabble: the dice were loaded from the start (jack/juliet)

Jan 04, 2010 23:38

Title: the dice were loaded from the start
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Jack + Jack/Juliet
Word Count/Rating: 108 words, PG
Summary: it comes with the breeze, ghosts across his lips, soft as a kiss. Set post-s3.
A/N: Written for the lost_in_108 challenge, memory. Title taken from the Dire Straits.

( Every night, he has a routine )

fic: lost, pairing: jack/juliet, character: jack shepherd, character: juliet burke

Comments 9

ciaimpala January 5 2010, 23:35:23 UTC

This is so beautiful...I love the way you used the song, and the depiction of "iodine and aloe" is such a strong image.

angeldylan628 January 6 2010, 04:26:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

vio55 January 6 2010, 04:04:52 UTC

Wow. Love the word choice and the overall tone you set here. Nice work. :D

angeldylan628 January 6 2010, 04:26:36 UTC

Thank you! :)

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angeldylan628 January 6 2010, 04:27:13 UTC

Thank you! I love that song too :D

ozmissage January 6 2010, 14:37:58 UTC

Ooh, this is so eerie and gorgeous and kind of makes my heart ache for Jack. Wonderful work.

valhalla37 January 7 2010, 03:30:32 UTC

Phenomenal -- so wonderful and haunting.