if the bottle won't kill you - desmond, charlie, eloise

Oct 27, 2009 00:48

Title: if the bottle won't kill you
Character(s)/Pairing(s): desmond, charlie, eloise
Rating/Word Count: pg, 108
Spoilers/Warnings: none
Summary: He drinks. Like a fish oh isn't that ironic

A/N: Written for lost_in_108 prompt, liquor. Also, written for the sacred_20 prompt, redemption

who knows who they're talking about anymore )

character: eloise hawking, character: charlie pace, character: desmond hume

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elliotsmelliot October 27 2009, 13:11:50 UTC
I just loved this. You really captured the lucid gasp when reality crashes into the surreal.

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angeldylan628 October 28 2009, 03:38:28 UTC
Thanks, sweetie! I'm glad you liked it :)

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ozmissage October 27 2009, 17:16:48 UTC
There is such a haunting quality about this that I love. Poor Des. Wonderful work!

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angeldylan628 October 28 2009, 03:39:08 UTC
Thank you! :)

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missy_useless October 27 2009, 21:22:51 UTC
You are amazing, as per usual. This ficlet is perfect.

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angeldylan628 October 28 2009, 03:39:40 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! :)

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angeldylan628 October 28 2009, 03:40:18 UTC
Thank you! :)

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jeaniris October 29 2009, 18:50:41 UTC
Loved it! Desmond driving the car, Eloise, how they are trapped by fate, just great!

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angeldylan628 November 1 2009, 03:30:11 UTC
Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it!

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