hp fic: and we did not know it but we had already lost (harry/hermione)

[angeldylan628]

and we did not know it but we had already lost
he’s not perfect. she forgets this sometimes. slightly au. set in book 7 during the tent scenes.
pg-13. 1211 words.

A/N: Written for the non canon ficathon
prompt: tell me now where was my fault//in loving you with my whole heart

Also, this is for lenina20. She's the reason I keep on writing these two.

Comments

[poppypickle]

Every time she grazes another silent scar, he looks at her and knows.

She’s making her mark.

GUH. I'm so obsessed with H/Hr/scars right now that it's not even funny. This is so lovely. I LOVE it. <333

[angeldylan628]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[oursadhearts]

Perfect! Like poppypickle, I am so obsessed with these two and with scars and ughhhh. Thanks so much for responding to my prompt! I love, love, love it!

[angeldylan628]

Your prompt was just perfect! I have such a soft spot for that song and for this ship and it just all worked out so well! I'm glad you liked the fic! And thank you for the feedback! :)

[angeldylan628]

I couldn't not write them after that movie. It was a bitch to do and I kept starting and stopping fics, but I FINALLY DID IT BECAUSE I TOTALLY PROMISED YOU FIC and I wouldn't let myself stop.

This ship will be the death of me because they're so...functional. I don't even know how to explain it. They work so well in fic. There's more potential there than anywhere else in HP. I just can't stop writing them. It's insane how much I can enjoy writing a ship that I'm not even sure I ship.

But yeah, I'm beyond relieved that you enjoyed this because it really was written for you. Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and for getting it and noticing all the little things that I see in this couple and hope I'm conveying in my writing. You truly are awesome! :)

[jusrecht]

HEART.

BROKEN.

;____________;

[angeldylan628]

*hands over duct tape* I'm sorry!

[aina_hhrdanem]

this is absolutely GORGEOUS! Wow, a million times wow. It's perfect. I cannot ask for more. It's completely tragic in the end, which makes it fit right into canon. It's realistic, it's believable, and I can definitely imagine them doing this.

[i]He’s used to being worshipped, used to being put on a pedestal and adored, but it’s always at arm’s length. They draw an invisible circle around him, a barrier he can’t see, but he can feel every time someone lays a hand upon him. They’re not touching him. They’re going through motions. Their gestures are never about him. They’re about something bigger, grander.

Hermione holds him and he feels it all the way through his body. The warmth of that embrace fuses to his bones, flows through his veins, settles inside his chest so it’s in tune with the rhythm of his heart. It’s a part of him.[/i]

Goddamn beautiful

Although I'm pretty sure Hermione might have a scar from Dolohov's curse. But maybe not.

[angeldylan628]

You're right. She probably does have a scar, but I don't think it's ever been confirmed so I just went with it.

Thank you for the wonderful feedback! I'm glad you liked the fic! :)