fringe fic:count your days like pocket change (olivia/peter, olivia/alternate!charlie, peter/astrid)

Sep 02, 2010 15:21

count your days like pocket change
olivia/peter, olivia/alternate!charlie, peter/astrid
ten years. that's how long it takes to get the universes to align again.
7,435 words. pg-13.

A/N: A big thank you to mollivanders who beta'ed this monster of a fic. I owe you a thousand times over. :)

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pairing: peter/olivia, pairing: peter/astrid, pairing: charlie/olivia, fic: fringe

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paynesgrey September 2 2010, 20:55:55 UTC
I loved it! This was a fantastic future fic after Season 2, and I love how you brought the characters together, while still staying true to canon in Peter and Olivia's strong feelings for each other. I loved the style in this too, the words just flowed so nicely there was an ethereal feel to the atmosphere throughout the story.

Brilliant work!
(btw your code is a little borked, but I was so excited to see anything P/A I couldn't help but read.) :D

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angeldylan628 September 3 2010, 02:34:51 UTC
I have fixed the weird coding. Thank you for pointing it out! All I had to do was miss one bad italics and the whole thing went to hell. :D

Thank you for the wonderful feedback as well! I've been working on this story since the season finale and it was so hard keeping everyone in character and honor the Peter/Olivia relationship when I wanted so bad just to skip right to Charlie/Olivia and Peter/Astrid.

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presquerousse September 2 2010, 21:20:41 UTC
This made me cry. So sad, but wonderful at the same time.

"In some universe, I'm sure we got a happy ending," he whispers in her ear, needing it to be true.

Waaaaaah.

(Also, you have a dodgy tag, which is making it post twice, if you know what I mean)

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angeldylan628 September 3 2010, 02:36:02 UTC
Thank you for pointing that out! I fixed it now! :)

And thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it.

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wasabi_girl1 September 2 2010, 22:01:19 UTC
Oh wow, this is AMAZING. Especially because I am definitely not averse to the idea of Peter/Astrid and Charlie/Olivia and you worked it all in so skillfully, never once degrading what Peter/Olivia is as well. So good, I'm at a loss for words. *mems immediately*

P.S. You might want to fix a few tags, the post is a little wonky.

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angeldylan628 September 3 2010, 02:41:38 UTC
They have been fixed...hopefully. It looks right now at least and not double posted or anything. *laughs*

Thank you for the feedback! I have a lot of love for Charlie/Olivia and Peter/Astrid, and I was a little afraid that would overshadow the struggle of Peter and Olivia letting go of their undefined relationship. I'm glad to hear that it didn't read as disrespectful to that pairing.

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angeldylan628 September 3 2010, 02:53:37 UTC
Thank you so much for such wonderful feedback! I'm really glad that you liked it. I'm always worried when I write a new fandom that I don't get the characters quite as well as I think I do, so hearing that this fic flowed well is so relieving. And I'm totally humbled that you recced me at het_reccers Thank you, again, so much!

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angeldylan628 September 3 2010, 02:54:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you liked it :)

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