Comments | so_shhy: X-Men First Class / Doctor Who Xover fic: The Crack's the Thing part 1 (Charles/Erik, 10,000 words)

so_shhy

X-Men First Class / Doctor Who Xover fic: The Crack's the Thing part 1 (Charles/Erik, 10,000 words)

Aug 13, 2011 19:21

So this fic kind of ran away from me. Yet again, it's a 1stclass_kink prompt, a Doctor Who crossover, the point being to have Charles and Erik searching the universe for their kid Amy-and-Rory style. Which starts in the middle of the 11th Doctor's second series. Prompt is here

This part gets you half-way through his first series. Sorry, OP.

This will make zero ( Read more... )

first class, why am i doing this?, fic, charles/erik, xover, doctor who

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OP for the prompt <3 chiaki_ayumi August 14 2011, 20:25:46 UTC

OMG... 10k words!! asdfghjlsdal- *hugtackleglomps You* I seriously didn't think it would be this BIG & EPIC!! ilu. ♥

*off to read it now*

Re: OP for the prompt <3 chiaki_ayumi August 14 2011, 20:46:12 UTC

I LOVE the start! You captured the Doctor perfectly that I had to squeeeeeee!! XD

and the 2nd 'chapter'!! OMG THE ADVENTURES & THE KIDS & ASDFGHJKLADSHL!!! Dear Author, I bow to your AWESOMENESS. *worships*

yes, I'm only at the 2nd part right now. expect more of this review(fangirling) along the day ♥

Re: OP for the prompt <3 so_shhy August 14 2011, 21:09:07 UTC

Hello again OP! Nice to meet you in the non-anon, and thank you for visiting my brand new journal. It made me so happy to have a comment! :D

OMG livejournal is confusing me utterly, there are *so many buttons*.

Anyway - I'm really glad you like the story so far! I actually know where the plot is going which is kind of unexpected, so I will write more if you are willing to read it...

Re: OP for the prompt <3 chiaki_ayumi August 14 2011, 23:58:56 UTC

commenting is the least I can do, when you've gifted me with this AWESOMEPICAMAZING!Fic!

I know! I've been here for years and I still have to check the html codes if I ant to change something >.<

My reaction when I found the Plot:
"OHMYGOD THE PLOTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!! *flailyflailflail* THIS IS EPIC!!"

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cecinepasfanfic August 16 2011, 20:53:24 UTC

OMG this is fucking flawless, excuse my French

so_shhy August 17 2011, 07:02:07 UTC

You are excused! There will be more...sometime...so do check back

mremre August 19 2011, 22:56:43 UTC

HOLY COW STALKING YOU FOREVER. Amazing story. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Wonderful work!!!

so_shhy August 20 2011, 07:15:32 UTC

Thank you very much! I never had a stalker before... to my knowledge :D

It's in the pipeline... damn those irrisistable kinkmeme prompts.

EPIC CROSSOVER IS EPIC artinrevolution September 2 2011, 22:10:12 UTC

OMG MARRY ME *.*

So I've been looking through XMFC's prompts and I just discovered this MAGNIFICENT fic.

This is definitely one of the best crossovers I ever read.
XMFC + Doctor Who = I just couldn't resist *.*
You managed to blend those two fandoms beautifully!

If you follow the second part of series 5, does that mean Erik is going to be erased from existence? And Charles is going to forget him? D:
Or will Charles be immune because of his telepathy?
Although I can't say I would be against seeing Erik as a centurion, haha. I heard about Michael's Centurion movie but I haven't seen it yet.

Anyway (sorry for all the chattering, I'm just so excited lol), I really can't wait to read the next part :DDD

(I apologize for my very bad English by the way, it's not my first language XD)

Re: EPIC CROSSOVER IS EPIC so_shhy September 3 2011, 08:31:56 UTC

Hello! Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it. Your comment made me super-happy :D

I am working on part 2 (except that somehow I cannot resist other prompts) but no spoilers...

Re: EPIC CROSSOVER IS EPIC artinrevolution September 3 2011, 14:24:53 UTC

Haha, I totally understand the thing about other prompts, if I could write decently in English, I'd have written a lot of them. I mean some prompts are just BEGGING to be written *.*

I reread the first part of your crossover today and...

‘Yes of course we’re on Earth.’ Charles says, exasperated. ‘Westchester, New York State, the USA, Earth, the solar system, the Milky Way.’

This reminds me so ridiculously of Donna when she first met the Doctor that my heart broke a little bit.
I really miss her. She was really the Doctor's best mate.

‘A Time Lord, did you say? That’s fantastic, can I have a sample of your DNA? Do you have DNA ( ... )

Re: EPIC CROSSOVER IS EPIC artinrevolution September 3 2011, 14:26:17 UTC

DAMN IT LJ! My comment was too long XDD

The Doctor gives him an unhappy look. 'I suppose if that's the way it is I'd better take you home. You're sure you won't give it another try? Take him for a beer, buy him flowers, give him a kiss? He's a good kisser.'

A good kisser? Erik tenses and then decides he really doesn't give a damn. Charles can do what the hell he likes.

Awwww, Erik, but we see right through you, we all know you're jealous of the Doctor! You should just kiss Charles, damn it!

'Oh shut up, Charles. I trusted you, didn’t I?' Erik says, with the feeling of re-treading old ground.

'Yes, but now you've stopped. It's upsetting. You can still trust me, I wouldn't leave you. Erik, I really, truly, honestly wouldn't. I've missed you so much, you have no idea.'

I miss you now, Erik thinks. I miss the person I thought you were.

Charles looks up at him with such sadness that Erik knows he heard. 'I was never perfect,' he says.

Those two are just sooooooo... I want to hug them both forever <3

Charles is looking a little ( ... )

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this_indulgence October 19 2011, 23:02:42 UTC

Ok. You officially have rights to my firstborn, in this and all other universes. This is AWESOME. You absolutely nail the Doctor (oh god Matt Smith's voice in this!!! PERFECTION.), the tone of the series, everything that makes it fun and exciting but also hugely dramatic and flail-inducing. And oh your Charles is so precious and adorable and wonderful and yes, definitely needs more hugs. And I love what you're doing with his relationship with Erik, the tension, broken expectations, being drawn together but still struggling to resolve their differences ... ahhh it's so good! *swoons*
Can.
Not.
WAIT until they find out about Pietro and Wanda, oooh that's going to be fuuuuuuuun!!! And terribly intense and heartbreaking of course because that's how XMFC & Moffat!DW like to toy with our souls.
Basically, as a huge and enthusiastic fan of both series, I heartily approve of, endorse and support this piece. It WORKS.
*catches breath*
More please? <3

so_shhy October 20 2011, 15:32:22 UTC

:DDDDDDDD Thank you so much for commenting! OMG I love Eleven so if you think I've managed to get even a flavour of his awesomeness across I am totally delighted.

There will be more! Eventually! I think! There are so many plot bunnies and I have written a whole bunch more scenes but sadly half of them are for part... um, possibly 4? ...so it may take a while! :D