Hubris, or the Downfall of Helena Cain, part 2

[wyrdwritere]

Everything in this part of the story I invented myself.  BSG is still someone else's property, though.

The lone Mark VII viper swung away from its wingman and headed directly for the Pegasus, while the other viper continued on towards the Galactica.  “Pegasus control, this is Galactica Viper Charlie Seven, requesting landing clearance.
A crisp voice

Comments

[cerebel]

I said before, I just really like the introduction to this story...it feels taken straight from the show.

I like that Cain and Zarek see eye-to-eye -- they both have that kind of ruthless quality about them that makes them intriguing characters. And I like her interactions with Starbuck, and the stilted quality of the conversation between Starbuck and Lee.

Basically, it's just awesome. Good job :)

[wyrdwritere]

Thank you. I value your good opinion of my work.