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Fic: Let Go of the Past

Jan 21, 2011 18:23

Title: Let Go of the Past
Pairing: Punk/Lita
Rating: PG
Complete: Yes
Genre: Fluff, angst
Prompt: 09. Past// Table
Summary: Lita has a hard time letting go of the past, but he is not letting her go again.
Warnings: Contains angst then schmoop.

( Let Go of the Past )

genre: angst, complete: yes, main character: lita, genre: h/c, main character: cm punk, het: one shot, author: awritinglilypea, genre: romance, pairing: lita/punk, claim: lita/punk 500 words or less

Comments 8

sweetrapture82 January 21 2011, 23:30:22 UTC

aw, that was great.. lovely ending and also that beginning, gah. I almost wanted to hit him, seriously.

awritinglilypea January 21 2011, 23:35:11 UTC

Thank you :) I don't know where any of it came from and I know, but he got orange juice over his head instead.

sparkly_shiny January 22 2011, 00:24:04 UTC

You definitely blew me away with this. I was expecting it to be total angst but then you showed that Punk has a soft side when he came into the room and apologized for being such an ass. It's a side of him that I'm sure not very many people get to see, and your characterization is lovely. I wouldn't imagine that Amy would show her vulnerability very often.

The ring is totally something he would get for her. Love the way you write this pairing, and the happy ending warmed my heart. Good job :)

awritinglilypea January 22 2011, 00:26:30 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and for a while I thought it was going to be pure angst but ta da. I'm in a fluffy mood apparently.

spunkyangel22 January 22 2011, 01:42:20 UTC

Aww I could totally see this happening with them.

awritinglilypea January 22 2011, 05:02:44 UTC

Thank you! You're awesome for reviewing.

cherrycokerocks January 22 2011, 08:37:34 UTC

Go Lita for pouring orange juice over him. I really enjoyed this one too. You're on a roll. See aren't you glad I suggested working on this one now? What do you mean, no? LOL.

I loved the "It should be sticky!" line just because it sounds like something he would say, lol.

*skips off to read more*

awritinglilypea January 22 2011, 16:58:07 UTC

I figure, he was tense over the proposal, she was tense over the memory of the break up. If I had more than 500 words it would have been more heated I think but I was limited.

Thank you :)