I'm so excited that you managed to make an update and write Lita/Punk fic and it was awesome. I loved the way you set it and the way it was written just felt right.
I'm glad you updated this series and I hope you can update again soon. Loved it <3
Goodness gracious. I didn't realize just how much I missed your wrestling fics until I read this. Lita/Punk is a favorite of mine because they're so unconventional, and because of that, you can do just about anything with them. I liked how you described them being darker and needing more. The balance of that coupled with the sweet act of love they made was so incredible.
If I may offer a bit of constructive criticism? I saw one tiny error.
He forced the candle out of it’s holder Its would be used instead of it's. It's=it is.
Lovely work, Ashley. You write these two very accurately.
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I'm glad you updated this series and I hope you can update again soon. Loved it <3
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I'm working on some stuff, we'll see.
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If I may offer a bit of constructive criticism? I saw one tiny error.
He forced the candle out of it’s holder Its would be used instead of it's. It's=it is.
Lovely work, Ashley. You write these two very accurately.
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Thanks for pointing that out, I do know the difference between its and it's but apparently just wasn't thinking.
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