Fic: Disobedience

[so_egregious]

Hello there! How are you all? :)

Title: Disobedience
Author: C, aka so_egregious
Rating: G/PG.
Word Count: 1,331.
Pairing: John/Paul
Warnings: The vaguest of hints at...something?, amateur psychoanalysis. ;)
Disclaimer: This is a true definition of fan fiction: a work of fiction, created by a fan.
Author's Notes/Summary: Some lessons just don't stick

Comments

[quazonic]

Ahhhh that was flippin' AMAZING. I love the Paul contradictions paragraph. :) Also - I've missed your fics! You should write more. Please? :D

And I can't believe I've never asked before - may I friend you? xD

[so_egregious]

Thank you so much, buddy! That Paul paragraph got a lot of tweaks, so you really lift a weight off my shoulders saying that. I over-obsess, what can I say? ;)

I'm trying! Sometimes it takes me a long time, but I promise I'm certainly stewing over something... ;) And by all means, friend away! All I post here is fic, but I'd be honored to add you as a friend! :D

Thanks again!

[quazonic]

That Paul paragraph is mooore than fine. It's brilliant, in fact. :D

Stewing over something? This is very good news. 8D Any teasers because I'm an impatient nut - but don't feel like you have to say anything! D:

Okay, will friend! :D And, you're welcome. :)

[so_egregious]

Well thank you again! *heaves sigh of relief*

I really don't want to give anything away, but not because I'm trying to maintain some air of "mystery" or something stupid like that. It's just that it's still really early in the works and it's a fairly big undertaking (lots of research to be done!), so I don't want to promise something and then not deliver...because I am notorious for epic failing (in my last fic fandom, anyway... *shudders as she gets embarrassed thinking of her last "big" story that she never finished, and never will, because she's a loser* ;)

[pauliejohnny1]

*grins*
It is such a treat to read a fic from you, dear.
This week has been particularly good as both you, and the lovely thinkpink20 have both posted wonderful fics :D

Your ideas for stories are amazing, and your writing ability always astounds me.

Mustn’t touch, John.

John had really, really tried. And the warning never left him, but it hardly mattered. Each time he sought out those eyes, or they sought out his (across a stage, across a room, across a bed), he knew that Mimi had been so very wrong. ...these lines, dear are just amazing, and so are you.

I hope you can post something else soon as it always brightens up my day to read something from you.

[so_egregious]

You are just so sweet, my friend, and I can't thank you enough for it! My drivel's even less impressive when next to Pink's, but it is ALWAYS a great week when she shares with us!

I was a bit unsure about the ending, so thanks for mentioning it...it's so great to hear when it works for someone. :)

I'm doing my best to work on more, but I over-analyze, over-research and just all around overly-obsess, so I promise if it takes awhile it's NOT a lack of interest. ;) Thanks again!

[deux_lunes]

I have to admit this... I'm such a fangirl for you. I actually squealed when I saw you posted a new fic. :3

But wow. This was amazing, as usual! John's treasures were the sweetest things (especially Paul). They're both something very special and I think you captured it *so* very well. John's curiosity and love of learning will never fail to make me warm and fuzzy and his great puzzle Paul becoming his great love just makes me happier than anything. FABULOUS work! <3 <3 <3

[so_egregious]

To read that someone's a "fangirl" over me, when there are so many great writers here...? Kind of made my day, I can't even lie. ;)

Thanks so much! I totally agree that both John and Paul are so special and unique, and there's no "easy" way to describe either one. I think John's constant curiosity was both a blessing and a curse for him, but it's what allowed him to have so many interesting characters in his life...Paul perhaps most of all. :)

Thank you again! :D

[deux_lunes]

I am, I'm such a fangirl! You are definitely in the top three in my book, probably in at least the top ten in any fandom I've read. <3

[so_egregious]

Oh WOW. DL, I've gotta say, that is FAR too nice for me to...know what to even say in response. You're a damn good writer, so I know you read good stuff, and knowing that? It makes this all the more flattering. Thank you so much! :D

[bello_romantico]

Every time I see that you've posted something, my heart gives a leap and I can't click on the link fast enough - I just love your work (although, I hope that you already knew that)! :)

Oh, my goodness, it is SO lovely to read another of your pieces! I've missed your writings and missed the quality and beauty of your work! Your John is always perfect - simply perfect - and I always love how fleshed out of a character he is in your hands. His personality is always so developped and those snippets of Mimi's words in between were just... gah! Perfect!

Beautifully crafted - another of my favorites from you. You write so well, dear... I'm always in awe.

I've missed you! Thank you so much for posting!

Lots and lots of love! <3

[so_egregious]

It's SO GREAT to see you again! I know you've had a busy few months, so it's awesome to have you back, and getting a comment from you is always a reason to :D! See? :D

Thanks so much, as always...I always do my best to make everyone seem as real as possible, so you pointing that out really makes me happy and feel like I accomplished...something here. Mimi's warnings were what started this piece, so I'm glad that framework worked for you.

Again, I'm happy as anything you're back, and I can't thank you enough for this! Love back to you in spades! :D

[so_egregious]

You know, I ALMOST told you I was working on this, but then I just decided to surprise you. ;)

You know your comments always mean the world to me, and this one is no different. I know you and I are similar in the fact that we agonize over our stuff (every word sometimes!), so reading this from you makes me feel like it's worth the time. And I always feel like an amateur when I look at how much YOU know about the boys, so I'm, like, flattered beyond words.

I was damn nervous about the Mimi stuff - I don't know how many times I rephrased that! I've always loved "your" Mimi, so your approval is awesome.

Credit where credit is due - I think the Julia/George...vibe, or impression on John, maybe, is something I picked up subconsciously from you. That if maybe he'd had those forces around longer...well, who knows what that might have been, right?

Thanks as always, friend of friends. I love you to death, but you already knew that. ♥ And...well, I promise nothing, but...hmm. Let's just say you may be hearing something about MOAR soon... :