Fic: But Now These Days Are Gone

[so_egregious]

Hi there. :)

Cross-posted several places, because that's how I do.

Title: But Now These Days Are Gone (Part One of Two)
Author: C, aka so_egregious
Rating: PG (in this part, at least).
Word Count: 2,386.
Pairing: John/Cynthia, John/Paul
Warnings: Language, mention of sexual act.
Disclaimer: This is a true definition of fan fiction: a work of fiction,

Comments

[perendur]

You should be writing for a living, seriously. I'm not saying it to sing your praises, either. It's not only that you have John (and Paul) down to a T, it's the humanity that your characters have. It really feels like this really happened, and you were there, inside their heads, as it did. And kudos on showing John being an arguably rotten dad and making us see his side of things. I'm very eager to read the second part, and I'm thrilled that you seem to be writing so much, I hope it never stops!

[so_egregious]

Oh my...I don't know what else to say other than a very heartfelt thanks.

I wish I knew how to translate any of what you so kindly said into original fiction, but it seems I need my characters already established first. Which sucks, really. But, I am so glad that what I can write is enjoyable. :)

John was no prize-winning father, and I don't think that being a great dad was his first priority. But I want to believe that he did try, and tried to show as much, so I'm really happy you pointed that out.

Thanks so so much, friend - this made my day. :)

[perendur]

I have the same problem (though not as much talent) as you about original fiction so, instead of writing, I started creating characters first, like, inventing people, and their personalities, and then imagine story lines that would fit with them. I still haven't written anything that I've finished, but I'm also lazy, so... It's just an idea, cause I really thing you have something here.

And about John as a dad, sometimes I find it funny how people are ready to crucify him for what he did as a husband and father to Cyn and Jules, but the truth is he was better than many fathers I know in real life, and he DID see the error of his ways and overcompensated with Yoko and Sean. How many bad dads you know admit they have sucked? John is always associated with peace and love, but to me he's always been about soul searching and personal growth. So, he was an immature dad when he was 25, he at least learned from it. Right?

[so_egregious]

It's a great idea, actually...I've tried that to a degree, but probably not thoroughly enough. Definitely something to keep in mind.

You make a good argument, and I agree somewhat. I'm glad that he attempted to rectify his shitty dad status with Sean, and somewhat with Julian. I think, had he lived, they would have gotten to a better point. But, you can't make up for the years of not being there for one son by being there from day one for another. Overall, I read a quote from Sean (surprisingly) that really sums it up (and I may be paraphasing but not much): "He [John] was an asshole, but he could admit he was an asshole." And that's better than nothing. ;)

[kelli64]

Oh my. That was glorious. I really felt bad for John, and I think you captured the situation wonderfully. I loved it.
Can't wait for the next part!

[so_egregious]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. :) While I sort of want to punch John sometimes, at other I just want to hug him. It's a weird dynamic. ;)

[so_egregious]

Oh no, I hope I didn't make you late! I mean, I'll admit I'm damn flattered you squeezed this in, but a holiday is NOT to be ignored! Hope you had a great time! :)

I think John is one of those people that needed a lot of care, but wasn't great at providing it, you know? And that's not a great trait in a parent. And as for "Help!"...I know it's a peppy, upbeat song musically, but for me it was always one that was just so sad. More than once it became almost anthemic for me during times I had the blues pretty badly. It fit into this scenario of John not really fitting in anywhere, so I hope you'll be happy with where this goes...

Thanks as always, pal - can't wait to hear from you! :D

[eppyschweppy]

Ooh this is looking interesting.
Really looking forward to the next part!

[so_egregious]

Thanks a lot! Hope you'll enjoy. :)

[the1world1is]

"Help!" is probably my sister's favorite Beatles song. :]
Once again, ACE. Damn right perfect sketch of them all.
-inward sigh- John and his insecurities always makes for a good story.
Can't wait to read part two!

... Poor Julian. D;

[so_egregious]

They do make for interesting reading, and challenging writing!

Thanks so much; hope you'll enjoy the second part later this week!