Harry Potter fic: Alone and Forsaken

Jun 21, 2009 09:42

Title: Alone and Forsaken
Word Count: 2700
Pairing/Characters: Harry, Draco
Rating: PG-13, or possibly R for language?
Warnings: MAJOR angst, language, suggestion, slight het. Post-war, not entirely epilogue-compliant.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters or profit from them. JK Rowling does.
Author's Note: Written for these challenges:
slythindor100 's Challenge # ( Read more... )

slash, drarry, fic

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just_heidi June 21 2009, 15:06:21 UTC
God Dammit! You write so bloody well!

The imagery in this story was so achingly beautiful. This fic just broke my heart :-(

*goes in search for chocolate to cheer myself up*

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so_digress June 22 2009, 10:53:37 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! Honestly, 'achingly beautiful' is the kind of thing I dream people will say about my writing, but it rarely happens. So thank you dearly!

Oh, and I apologise for breaking your heart! Maybe I will have to write some heart-mending fluff to fix it :)

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lucianwolf June 21 2009, 16:05:54 UTC
Well, well, well done.

This is exquisitely, brilliantly vivid - his heart-breaking loneliness is achingly tangible. You've given me fantastic insight into Draco.

And dear god - tear my heart out some more, yeah?

I am so proud of you.

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so_digress June 22 2009, 11:04:56 UTC
I don't think I have to tell you how much this comment means to me. I think you know. I hope you know. But thank you from the bottom of my can-canning heart :)

Oh, and the tangibility of the loneliness? You know what they say... write what you know :/

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acidicfog June 21 2009, 20:09:15 UTC
... God, that was beautiful.

I can relate, too. I used to live in a house literally lined with mirrors, I don't know who decided that was a good idea, but every time I'd break down I'd have to see it.

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so_digress June 22 2009, 11:19:03 UTC
Thank you so much. I marvel that I have the ability to produce beauty. It's like the Bright Eyes song 'Waste of Paint':

"Thank you, please, but your flattery is truly not becoming me... no beauty could have come from me."

Damned low self-esteem :)

Btw, the first image that came into my head about your old house with all those mirrors was that of a funhouse! Although, obviously, with a notable absence of fun.

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so_digress July 18 2009, 12:39:40 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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