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Folie à Deux

Nov 24, 2007 09:56

Title: Folie à Deux
Author: bluestocking79
Rating: G as can be!
Warnings: None
Summary: Luna is inspired by the winter's first snow. Severus is inspired by Luna.
Notes: A pair of drabbles, originally written for snape100, for the prompt "Weather." Also, the term “folie à deux” refers to “the madness of two,” or a delusion shared by two people.

( Let it snow... )

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Comments 18

the_bitter_word November 24 2007, 19:31:37 UTC

Ah, yes, the magic of snow and Luna, beautifully conveyed. Who could resist?

bluestocking79 November 24 2007, 20:04:24 UTC

Thank you! Luna is so good at seeing the magic in things other people take for granted, isn't she? I don't think anybody could blame Severus for being so enchanted by her.

Also: what a wonderful icon! They look so great together.

moonys_badgirl November 25 2007, 02:01:33 UTC

Luna can make people do anything even if it is not something they wouldn't usually do.

bluestocking79 November 25 2007, 03:07:11 UTC

Yes, that's her gift--and Severus is exactly the sort of person who needs her encouragement!

mollyssister November 25 2007, 02:26:37 UTC

My favorite line of the drabble duo is Under a moonlit veil of snow, she danced. I can see the magical snow and the wonder that Luna sees in it. Thank you so much!

bluestocking79 November 25 2007, 03:08:32 UTC

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm very fond of that line myself, so I'm happy that you like it.

dark_malignity November 27 2007, 19:01:35 UTC

yay. you jus made me very very happy! i *LOVE* the idea of luna making him do things he would not normally do. not even on purpose, but just by being herself. *is love*

i think u wrote severus really well. i chucked after every sarky bit! my fav is this: "he smiled in sensible disapproval"

it might have been nice if you had dragged the last bit tho. i wld hv imagined tt even tho the insight hits him like a brick, it might take longer for him to acknowledge it... and maybe even then struggle to acknowledge his acknowlegement. haha! a few extra descriptive sentances could have set a beautiful pace.

anw, loved it, and thanks for sharing!

bluestocking79 November 27 2007, 19:36:07 UTC

Thank you! Yes, I think Luna would be very good at getting Severus to try new things, just by being Luna.

I actually agree that Severus would probably struggle with himself a bit longer before giving in, but I had to stick to the 100-word drabble format, so the struggle got abit condensed. ;-) I have some longer stories for the two of them in the works, though!

dark_malignity November 27 2007, 20:12:33 UTC

awww... drabbles are such fun-spoilers sometimes. ;)

will be looking forward to reading ur stuff in the future! yay! (and drop me a nudge if i dont read when u post... it might hv been buried somewhere in the spam that makes up my f-list, lol!)

bloodcult February 7 2008, 12:28:55 UTC

I just happened onto this story and am amazed. Pure Magic.

bluestocking79 February 7 2008, 14:26:33 UTC

Thank you for you kind words! I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed it.