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snubnosedsil

Father's Day Chapter 5: Siblings

Oct 13, 2012 12:57

Title: Father's Day Chapter 5: Siblings
Rating: G
Wordcount: 3322

Summary: "This was so much easier back when I was the only one with secrets," River muttered under her breath as she raised her hand to ring Brian's doorbell.

SPOILERS FOR "THE ANGELS TAKE MANHATTAN" AND "P.S."

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eleventh doctor/river song, fic, the bbc makes me a lying liar, doctor who, ponds, father's day

Comments 5

dqbunny October 13 2012, 22:06:58 UTC

Just what I need today. More tears. This was lovely and fits in perfectly with all this. *sniffs* Oh, and Brian, you are one smart cookie. I always knew you'd figure it out.

snubnosedsil October 13 2012, 23:04:42 UTC

So glad you enjoyed! I really didn't want to retcon my earlier chapters, and it's reassuring to hear from others that this one fits.

dqbunny October 13 2012, 23:21:55 UTC

No, I think it fits in perfectly. I don't think River wanted to accidentally spoil herself, otherwise she would have known about Manhattan in advance. Then, it took awhile for her to pull herself together enough to lightly begin poking around. I really hope to see more from these three.

bambiscott October 16 2012, 16:50:32 UTC

OMG read all the chapters and im so sad. I loved this. Would love to see more even if its with Anthoy's kids or something. Maybe even the Doctor keep this up!

snubnosedsil October 17 2012, 23:32:15 UTC

Thank you! I keep saying this fic is done and then canon or a comment sends me into plot bunny mode. We'll see what the future brings for this series!