Oh dear lord, where to start? I am so overwhelmed by the whole chapter, that I am on the verge of being speechless. So I guess I will respond to your points on the chapter, because in my mind, you really can do no wrong. Warning: MAJOR EGO BOOSTS FOR YOU IN THIS REVIEW
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the chapter was good and long! But it really freaked me out! I think to much and always when I see movies or read something in the papers about stuff like what you just posted I get carried away. I feel to much and then I get depressed that things like this happens in the real world!
Whenever I am just starting to get antsy about when you're going to update, you do. It makes me really happy :). I think your sex scenes are great, they are sexual (duh...) and really descriptive. As a reader, you totally get into the heads of Draco and Hermione. I am worried and excited about the outcome of this story, Draco isn't a bad guy right? He is just being warped by that spell? It makes me nervous to see Hermione so out of sorts but in the end I know it will all come together. Still, I love the story and I love to see your story updated.
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the chapter was good and long! But it really freaked me out! I think to much and always when I see movies or read something in the papers about stuff like what you just posted I get carried away. I feel to much and then I get depressed that things like this happens in the real world!
But well writen!!
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