relativity (2/10)

[snowflake912]

Title: Relativity
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Comments

Oh my I love this!

[anonymous]

Your writing is so gripping, I'm completely hooked! So believable for both characters. Can't wait for the next instalment!

Re: Oh my I love this!

[snowflake912]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's great to hear you found it in-character. I am constantly agonizing over keeping them in character while conveying at the same time that this was a completely different point in the course of their relationship. The dynamic was different, but it's still Harvey and Donna.

Hope you continue to enjoy my take on their history / present / future. :)

[phrenitis]

Flashback fic! It kills me because it's what I want, but apparently I like fics that hurt? Beautiful paaaain. But you also gave such an awesome sexy opening which was just as delicious, so I can't decide which part I loved more. :D

Nicely done!

[snowflake912]

It's pretty painful to write too. They're such a tragic pair - so much wasted time. Sadness. Glad you enjoyed my attempt at a sexually charged dance scene :)

I so enjoy reading your comments! Thanks a bunch for taking the time to read and comment! :)

[tidbit2008]

Mmmm. This hurts in all the right places. Well done!

[snowflake912]

Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it :)