thank you so much. I'm so glad you didn't have her act all awkward or leave him or something. This was so satisfying just reading the little happiness in the eye of the storm. : )
Bless Bill and his possessive sleepong habits, I dread to think what Laura would have done if she wasn't wrapped in so tightly by Bill. I'm really glad you didn't have her bolt. D'aaww, I just love sleepy Bill.
You just know Bill would be a cuddler. And completely sleepy and adorable.
I think they are too tightly entwined for Laura to bolt at this point. And not just physically. :) Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy the rest as well!
Your strength really is these sorts of scenes that grow out of their true, canonical conflict, not some superficial argument. And your other strength is hot smut, again, coming from within the characters, not just body parts moving around. It all really comes together well in this chapter. There was so much tension--I was waiting for the comm to ring or something--and then I realized you don't need that, because you're going to do it by utilizing two mature adults and what really happens in their minds.
Wow. Thank you so much for the amazing comment. It really means the world to me. I really worked very hard with this story to keep it believable and to draw the conflict out of the situation they had been dealt - to show the inner, in between scenes that we never got to see. To know that I've been successful is fabulous. I'm so very glad that you're enjoying the story and hope that you like the remaining chapters as well.
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D'aaww, I just love sleepy Bill.
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I think they are too tightly entwined for Laura to bolt at this point. And not just physically. :) Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy the rest as well!
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