Which Willow: More Than A Mission (1/1) - Willow/Riley - FRT-13/PG-13

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Title: More Than A Mission

Comments

[velvetwhip]

You already know that I think this is fantabulous, but I definitely wanted to reaffirm that here. A great "what-might-have-been", my dear! Bravissima!

Gabrielle

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Thank you so much, sweetie!

[velvetwhip]

You did a great job of balancing the Initiative aspects with Willow's personal relationship with Riley. I really do want to see a sequel... the addition of Hostile 17?

Gabrielle

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I'm really not sure about a sequel. I'll keep it in mind though.

[punch_kicker15]

Delurking to say that I really liked this. Willow and Riley had a lot of potential to be an interesting couple and I think you captured that well. If you wanted to write a sequel, I'd be interested in reading it too.

Also, just a heads-up, the paragraph that starts, “But I’m not…. I mean, I am a practicing Wicca" looks like it has some editing notes in it in parentheses (I deleted a repeated sentence here.)

[snogged]

Thanks so much!
I definitely agree that Willow and Riley had a lot of potential. Too bad the show didn't go there.

Ooh! Thanks for the catch.

[snogged]

Thank you so much, hun!

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Thank you so much!

[angelskuuipo]

You know I'm a fan of the pairing and this just has all manner of possibilities. Great job, babe!

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Thanks!!