I actually think the Chuck/Summer one might be my favourite. Your Summer seems completely in character (from what I remember of season 4) and your Chuck is perfect. I love the mention of Jeff and Lester, and how it's almost like Chuck being taken is an afterthought, like he's not sure, which fits so well.
The Robin/Lily one is also really good. I like how you can see how/what Robin's feeling, since she her emotions are kind of hidden of the show. Lily and the references to the show itself are bang on (Bilingu-Ale, the boys at the airport).
The Rory/Jess one is exactly how I hope they ended up, and the way you capture both of them is brilliant.
The HP one is light, but it displays Harry and Hermione's friendship in a way that it wasn't displayed in the last few books.
Good job on all of them, and I love the rest of your stories!
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The Robin/Lily one is also really good. I like how you can see how/what Robin's feeling, since she her emotions are kind of hidden of the show. Lily and the references to the show itself are bang on (Bilingu-Ale, the boys at the airport).
The Rory/Jess one is exactly how I hope they ended up, and the way you capture both of them is brilliant.
The HP one is light, but it displays Harry and Hermione's friendship in a way that it wasn't displayed in the last few books.
Good job on all of them, and I love the rest of your stories!
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