Fic: Costume Party - Peter/Elle

Oct 25, 2007 15:04

Title Costume Party
Fandom Heroes
Pairing Peter/Elle
Rating PG-13/R-ish
Warnings allusions to sex and violence
Spoilers nothing past "Fight or Flight."
Word Count 581
Summary "She looks innocent, angelic even, until you catch that twinkle in her eye, that curl to her lip that tastes dangerous when you press your mouth to hers."
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avaserenity October 25 2007, 23:21:07 UTC
Ohh I like this.

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havemy_heart October 26 2007, 12:38:56 UTC
I think Elle's characterization is perfect. I love this :)

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aimtomiss October 26 2007, 19:40:06 UTC
umm, that's weird because I totally commented on this yesterday. I don't know what happened but I KNOW I did. hmmmm, ???.

Anyway, what I said is that you made Peter/Elle really believable, and you characterization of elle was perfect for what we know so far. I love the things you filled in, and the 'electricity' between them.

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forwardish October 26 2007, 19:54:31 UTC
oooh, good Peter/Elle XD

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motylik October 31 2007, 21:43:14 UTC
This was really great! You really made them believable. You wouldn't consider a sequel would you? ;)

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