My favorite thing about this 'verse is how everything flows so naturally. The emotions are so intense and so real. Jared coming out to his parents was frightening and painful and frustrating and so realistic and I loved how you captured how it is truly a process, a lifetime journey. The sex was amazing and sweet and beautiful and flush-inducing. *Sigh* and they love each other, which of course they do because your characterization and writing beautifully shows how in love they are and I didn't need to hear them say it to see that but it still was one of my favorite scenes. I can't gush about this fic enough. I just love how *true* it feels.
Oh and the title was very fitting, with the beach setting and the fact that Jared started this big scary journey by coming out. Now I need to get some sleep but I just couldn't NOT read this when I saw it posted. :)
I saw this posted on Padackles RPS and I was so shocked and excited I was like -
*gasp* *gasp!!* *GASP!!!* OMG!!!
I just love this 'verse so so much. It's kind of scary! Anyhoo, I loved the part with Jared's parents. I kind of teared up a little and I'm not even having one of my insanely emotional days where anything makes me cry like the sissy girl I really am. And then the smutty part *blush* it was really good too. :) And I love the ending to bits. The Dr.Pepper part made me weepy too. He really does have the best boyfriend. I want him all for myself. When I read that part I couldn't stop going 'Awwwwwww'. Okay, I'll stop gushing now or I'll look like a suck-up. Hope there'll be more of this 'verse because it really is awesome. Go you!
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Oh and the title was very fitting, with the beach setting and the fact that Jared started this big scary journey by coming out. Now I need to get some sleep but I just couldn't NOT read this when I saw it posted. :)
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I saw this posted on Padackles RPS and I was so shocked and excited I was like -
*gasp*
*gasp!!*
*GASP!!!*
OMG!!!
I just love this 'verse so so much. It's kind of scary!
Anyhoo, I loved the part with Jared's parents. I kind of teared up a little and I'm not even having one of my insanely emotional days where anything makes me cry like the sissy girl I really am. And then the smutty part *blush* it was really good too. :) And I love the ending to bits. The Dr.Pepper part made me weepy too. He really does have the best boyfriend. I want him all for myself. When I read that part I couldn't stop going 'Awwwwwww'. Okay, I'll stop gushing now or I'll look like a suck-up. Hope there'll be more of this 'verse because it really is awesome. Go you!
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such a great follow up
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