Fluidity

[sneakersiam]

Name: Fluidity
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: Shindong x Heechul
Rating: 14+, non explicit sex and lots and lots of angst
Words: 2908
Notes: Originally prompted by the 100 Suju fic challenge, 90 Clean. It’s deviated greatly from what I originally intended it to be.

For stevenghost, of course. Half way through I intended on giving up on this and scrapping it

Comments

[ayray]

Now... That was... Oh... So... Офигительно прекрасно. Can't get enough English words for my impression. *_____*

[sneakersiam]

Oh wow, thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[miracleshining]

Exquisite. That's the only word I can think of to fit this piece of work. Thank you so much for finishing this and sharing it with everyone here.

[sneakersiam]

Aww, thank you so much for the comment. :)

[skittles]

I love this and you and I wish I had more time to go into details like I normally do but I have to go to work so I can't right now but I promise I will later. . [/run on sentence]

One minor thing I wanted to point out though is that Heechul is actually Shindong's hyung.

You act like a good hyung and comfort me in my time of need only so you can fuck me!”

You might want to change that to dongsang instead. :D

So much love for this story. <33333 I can't wait to get home to read it again and quote everything under the sun. ILUSM.

[sneakersiam]

ilu2!!!!!!

omg. D: I always check ages to make sure that I get those sort of things right and I know that Heechul is older. *gah* Thanks for pointing it out.

[sneakersiam]

:D Thank you! And ilu2!

I put on my angsty music playlist and just went to town when writing this. Haha.

[kayjayloves]

Waa, this had so much subliminal art woven into is (i especially like the eunhyuk hints and parts)

It was nice to read a fic that looked at a harsher reality - instead of a in!slash!world!everyone!is!gay!and!happy! universe. It was really beautiful, in a painful way. But things slowly turned out right.

<333 for this

[sneakersiam]

Thank you~ I really like how Eunhyuk popped up into this. I never intended for him to play such a big role in the piece originally. :'D Perhaps I'll do his own story sometime.

I love gaygaygay Suju most of the time but sometimes it gets under my skin when everyone's gay. Hahaha~

[kayjayloves]

OH man, you should do his own story O_O *pokes you* (please? XDD)

And yes, GAYLOVEFORALL!suju is wonderful, but it's nice to have some variety XDD My logical mind rejects the gayness of everyone sometimes D: haha

[sneakersiam]

Haha. I'm considering doing his side, since it's all in my head and all, and maybe another from Heechul's point of view. Because at the end he changes so drastically and it's because of events that I didn't write in. n____n

Same here. Sometimes it just gets too much, like, "EVERYONE CANNOT BE GAY >:(". But most times it's fun with gay Suju. :D