Comments | snarry100: First Touch

chiralove in snarry100

Oct 14, 2006 23:13

Title: First Touch
Author: lesyeuxverts00
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Challenge: 27 - Touch
Disclaimer: Not mine ( Read more... )

Comments 20

lilyeyes October 15 2006, 03:42:47 UTC

OMG - I love it!! Wonderful!

chiralove October 15 2006, 03:44:12 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

shouldknobetter October 15 2006, 03:49:01 UTC

The last three words really sticks with you. Well done!

chiralove October 15 2006, 03:58:59 UTC

Awww, thank you so much! :)

alisanne October 15 2006, 04:00:54 UTC

Oh that's lovely! Beautiful use of the prompt. :)

chiralove October 15 2006, 04:03:14 UTC

Thanks, hon! It should worry me that the one I wrote while tipsy makes more sense than the one I wrote sober ... shouldn't it? :)

jadzia7667 October 15 2006, 05:54:54 UTC

I love this. Such a connection between them.

chiralove October 16 2006, 02:02:32 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. :)

gaycrow October 15 2006, 07:17:49 UTC

I liked this. Nice and sparse, but conveying everything needed.

chiralove October 16 2006, 02:01:59 UTC

Thanks! I love the way the word limit forces you to compact everything down ... glad you liked it! :)