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Completed fic - Girl Stuff - PopFic

Mar 31, 2008 07:40

Girl Stuff
a word2urmomma challenge fic by SnarkyLlama

8,100 words
(Lynn-centric Britney/Justin)
None of this is real, yo.

Now as a podfic! (21MB MP3; 57 min)

Summary: Britney's got a schoolgirl crush.

( She wouldn't have paid Justin much attention if it weren't for his mother, Ms. Harless. )

*nsync, popslash

Comments 21

kira_j April 2 2008, 10:39:01 UTC

I love the line about how Lynn's lips aren't lip-coloured, and this bit: Britney was like ninety-three percent certain that she was in love with Justin. All she needed was a push and she'd fall. was interesting, and the scene where Justin and Britney are messing about and she's asking if she needs to be sexier was super cute!

And dude. The ending. I totally didn't anticipate it! It was awesome.

llamabitchyo April 2 2008, 12:13:28 UTC

Thank you! The Britney/Justin scenes towards the end were surprise additions to what I'd planned, but they made me feel so warm and fuzzy towards them. ... Guess that was my inner secret Britney/Justin shipper expressing itself. :)

The ending. I totally didn't anticipate it! It was awesome.

Yay!

I had so much fun writing this, knowing all along that that was what I was leading to. I hope it wasn't too traumatic for anyone.

rikes April 8 2008, 21:34:13 UTC

This was awesome, creepy and cute at the same time. And the joshlynn was just the icing on the cake! :D

llamabitchyo April 9 2008, 12:00:38 UTC

Thank you!

And the joshlynn was just the icing on the cake!

Hee~ And sometimes the icing is the best part! (Or at least the most fun.)

bossymarmalade June 17 2008, 01:10:21 UTC

Okay, so -- this story is funny for sure, especially the payoff! -- but there's so much other stuff going on, and that's what I really love: stories that jumble the funny and the painful and the wistful all together, the way that life actually tends to be ( ... )

llamabitchyo June 17 2008, 13:16:14 UTC

Wow. Thank you for the great, insightful feedback! :)

I knew when I was writing this that I was playing with at least two layers of story. But you and phaballa have both made me see more here than I was consciously aware of.

Also, thanks for bringing my attention back to this story. I've been so busy with other stories, I'd forgotten how special this one felt to me. I've never borrowed so heavily from personal experience before in a fic, and yet the end result is someone who seems so alien to me... like very real, but utterly foreign.

musicboxgirl March 17 2009, 13:58:49 UTC

OMG I cannot tell you how freaking AWESOMESAUCE (the good kind) this fic is! I will love it forever because LYNN and BRITNEY AND JC and it's all just so perfect. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

emylina September 10 2009, 23:23:22 UTC

This is amazing! I haven't read a lot of Britney fic so phaballa recommended this one, and I'm so glad she did!
Your Britney voice is really good and I adore the plot.

<3