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With a View to a Kill, Come Undone

Feb 25, 2011 13:23

Title: With a View to a Kill, Come Undone
Author: SnarkyGirl101
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Anything up until the Sue Sylvester Shuffle episode.
Word Count: 2,458
Summary: He knows what he likes-boobs, high heels, skirts, and long hair. Then Kurt Hummel screws everything up.

A/N: I’m still trying to figure out Dave Karofsky, and the SB episode ( Read more... )

angst, glee, kurt hummel, dave karofsky

Comments 13

ibshafer February 25 2011, 20:22:04 UTC

Oh, poor Dave - the King of D-Nile...

Nice look into what's been going on in Dave's head whilst everything else has been happening.

Poor, poor David...:(

snarkygirl101 February 25 2011, 20:28:46 UTC

Have to admit, that poor boy probably has legal rights to over half of that river's milage. Thank you so much for reading! :]

aquagirl77 February 25 2011, 21:02:58 UTC

And bringing his perfect prissy boyfriend to tell him he’s not alone? What a lie. He’s gay and very much alone.

So sad and so true! poor bb :( I loved your insight in this.

Hopefully the show gives us some more Dave development, without breaking all our hearts!

snarkygirl101 February 25 2011, 21:05:10 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate you reading~ I agree, I really want some happy development for Dave, so I'll stop writing angst about him. It would probably help if I stopped lurking around the angst meme, but ehhh.

mrs_sakuma February 25 2011, 22:33:09 UTC

wow. very sweet. i mean, dave's kind of...over the line most of the time, but since the sue shuffle i've found myself sympathizing a lot with him. he really is just scared, confused, and insecure.

stupid boys.~

snarkygirl101 February 26 2011, 00:06:10 UTC

I think what I love about Dave the most is the potential. If he could just accept himself, I don't think there would be a limit to what he could achieve. Maybe that's just my fangirl talking, but eh.

heygirlie February 26 2011, 00:41:04 UTC

I hope it's ok for the beta to comment, because I loved this! :D The transition of mantras worked out nicely and you could tell how Dave is both lonely and alone unlike Kurt. And I choked on my drink at the Lady Gaga telephone line, that was hilarious. Brava!

snarkygirl101 February 26 2011, 00:55:45 UTC

Yay, I'm happy to hear that! I wasn't sure what you had meant about the word game (would you believe I've never played it?), so I'm happy it worked out~ And I was quite proud of myself for the Gaga line, thank you. :'D

fuherbunnycakes February 26 2011, 05:20:32 UTC

This is lovely. You did such a fantastic job of getting inside Dave's head. And I don't know why, but I choked on my soda when I read shellacked smarmy prep boy XD

snarkygirl101 February 26 2011, 05:25:50 UTC

Yay, thank you so much for reading! I'm happy I got the result I was going for. I love Blaine, really, but the boy needs to lay off the hair gel.