Week 16 entry...

[snarkerdoodle]

Comments

[lawchicky]

Oh this broke my heart- those kids!

[snarkerdoodle]

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad that it worked for you (even if it was a wee bit sad). ;)

[notodette]

What a great idea and well done story. I really enjoyed it.

[snarkerdoodle]

Thank you so much! :D

[basric]

A tragic but lovely told story. Well done.

[snarkerdoodle]

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :)

[muchtooarrogant]

What a unique idea, and very well told story. I'm glad you included Lucas' sister as part of the pact, it added a whole other demension to the story. Very well done!

Dan

[snarkerdoodle]

It seemed more interesting to have it be something that happened to them both, yeah -- I'm glad that it was something that worked for you as the reader as well. Thanks as always for reading and commenting, much appreciated! :)

[karmasoup]

This has a feel of ancient native folklore retold in a modern setting. <3 <3 <3 Fabulous.

[snarkerdoodle]

Thank you so much! :D