is it cause you don't mean it, or cause i don't feel it

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title: just another heat wave
rating: pg
fandom: football
word count: 423
prompt: 08, crash
pairing: mesut, mesut/marko
summary: mesut just crashes.
notes: before mesut transferred to real, obviously. really sorry about the crappiness of this fic ): i've come to the realisation that i can't write mesut, which is really unfortunate ):

Comments

[megzchyna]

I ♥ the Mesut and Marko fic. My favourite pairing.

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thank you for reading ♥ (:

[jungle_moon]

Oh God the Davids! That was 5 seconds WASTED!!

Villa wanted to say it..but he waited for Silva to say it first! Wanted to hear it from Silva! Thus the sighing after the 5 seconds silent. *sighs*

And Silva was just..scared?..to say it..but then Villa gave the most deepest hint of his feeling, and Silva realized what it was..but it's late already.

But perhaps not too late. Perhaps being away is the way for them to start all over again. To say their feelings. Like Silva said.."Maybe THIS is where the new beginning starts, maybe, just maybe."

(^_^)

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i'm glad you liked the dv/ds fic (:

thank you for reading ♥

[liberta]

Oh my, that DV/DS, so sad, so angsty. :( Hits you in the guts, really.

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i'm glad you enjoyed it (:

thank you for reading ♥

[coldryuuza]

omg, that 2nd POV works like a charm, how that courage just flees once the moment passes. oh Silva, my chivis *cuddles him*

no, this is most excellent characterizations, so kudos!!

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i'm really glad you like the second p.o.v! i was worried about it not working well with the dv/ds piece, so the fact that it worked for you makes me really happy (:

thank you so much! this is my first attempt writing dv/ds so that means a lot to me (: thank you for reading ♥

[freefallskyline]

wait I just need to

lol you wrote me porn.

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... lol that was like extremely mild porn :|