The first line is really powerful, almost poetry! You've managed to capture the relations between the various characters (Remus and Tonks, Remus and the Marauders, Snape and Lily) extremely well for a 100-word-drabble - everyone seems to have returned to the time, and to the people, that meant the most to them, but that does mean that others find themselves left out. I find the idea of Snape entering the afterlife as a fifteen-year-old somehow both very cute and very sad.
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