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venturous1 January 13 2008, 18:10:17 UTC
this is fascinating... always wanted more on his family background. Reading on with anticipation!

BTW here is a little edit I think you may have missed:
Eileen's father Septimus Snape came from Saxon and Norman stock should that be Septimus Prince?

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Thank You So Much! karendetroit January 13 2008, 23:56:19 UTC
You are absolutely correct and I have fixed the error. Talk about a brain fart.

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guinnevere_b January 14 2008, 00:58:31 UTC
Good first chapter; looking forward to more!

Good job.

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geri_chan January 14 2008, 08:31:24 UTC
Great history you invented for Eileen! I like the idea of her being more comfortable in the Muggle world and even being afraid of magic--that's a unique twist that I haven't seen before. Lokking forward to the next chapter!

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