Graceing Heaven

Jan 10, 2007 14:56

Hey guys. I just finished this peice and I wanted to share it with my fellow Unbreakable shippers. Remember to read and review!

Title: Gracing Heaven
Author: xNymphadoraX
Rating: NC-17
Summary: One glorious night together could change everything for Severus and Narcissa, or not...
Words: 2,467
Disclaimer: I'm just borrowing Severus Snape and the ( Read more... )

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aragon_san January 11 2007, 02:01:27 UTC
Interesting read! The teenage-angle as a starting point of their relationship is something I rarely see with this pairing ( ... )

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xnymphadorax January 11 2007, 02:24:26 UTC
This was the time line that I came up with for the story. Narcissa was born in 1955 and Severus in 1958, making them 3 years apart. The Lexicon states that Severus was born in either 1958 or 1959 (I went with '58 just because it makes it a little less strange...) She was a 7th year and he was a 4th year when they began seeing each other. I imagined that Narcissa would have married Lucius immediately after leaving school in 1972. I wanted her first (and only) tryst with Severus to occur around Draco's conception, which is why I said she had been married for 8 years without conceiving. Although, I realize now that that should have been 7 years because she was pregnant in 1979. I never know how to make time clear in my stories... *sigh*

Also, I didn't mean to convey that Severus had been pining for her for those 8 years. Just that he was living his life and he happened to be around her a lot because of his friendship with Lucius.

Thanks for the criticism, I really appreciate it and thanks for reading!

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aragon_san January 11 2007, 03:33:13 UTC
Thanks for clarifying things! Wow, that makes it even more unusual with Narcissa going for a significantly younger boy! And, well, I suppose that it makes Severus also the undisputed stud of Slytherin if not his whole year... because how many 4th year boys can say they date a girl 3 years older, popular and very pretty?! But I like it. I'm all for giving Severus good things ^_^ It also adds to the star-crossed-lovers feeling.

re-timeline - I've seen the Lexicon-timeline and I personally find the Snape+Marauders-birthyears for 1960 (which was the first reasonable date with all the "it was 20 years ago"s we've got) and/or 1959 the only really logical ones. Both with the explicit stating that Sirius was 22 when sent to Azkaban in late 1981 or early 1982 and Snape being 35 or 36 during GoF in 1995 and all starting Hogwarts in September 1971.
The only reason to go even earlier and discard the few hard facts we do have are Bella's "should have been a Hogwarts 7th year during Snape's first year" (Which would have been entirely possible ( ... )

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xnymphadorax January 11 2007, 04:31:03 UTC
Yeah, I get where poor Jo is coming from. It's hard to keep track of all that math!

I've never fancied the Severus/Lily pairing. The idea of it just rubs me the wrong way. Imagine Harry finding out that his mother may have been involved with Severus Snape... The boy would have a break down!

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xnymphadorax July 20 2007, 17:57:26 UTC
Thanks! I think their relationship has a very sweet but tragic element to it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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xnymphadorax July 20 2007, 18:05:42 UTC
Of course I don't mind!

Love that icon, by the way. :)

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