fic: half sick of shadows

[snakevsladder]

half sick of shadows
Z/Charlotte
PG
~2500 words. The Like graduate high school and finally get to go on a real tour.

Written for la_dissonance for help_pakistan. I AM SO SORRY THIS IS SO LATE, BB. I wish I had an excuse, like it was super super long or something and therefore took forever, but mostly it was just bad time keeping and planning and an inability to write an

Comments

[cool_rain_kiss]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AND THEN ♥__♥

[la_dissonance]

Oh oh oh! Honey, this is just perfect. I love all the little details of their new lives in the road, and how Z takes to it so quickly she doesn't even miss home. The line about Tenn being married to her drums made me giggle irl. Oh girls. Could they be more precious? <3

Z and Charlotte were kind of just the right kind of hurty with all their tension and things left unfinished (unstarted?). I love how you wrote Charlotte especially, that's kind of exactly how I see her acting on my head. *sigh*

...Long comment is long, lol. Basically I love everything about this, thank you a millionty for writing it! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[listedheart]

Oh my god, this comment is like a million years late, idk why I never replied before, but I just wanted to say I'm so happy you liked this! :D ♥

[la_dissonance]

Yay! I was worried I might have left it while you were hiding from LJ or something; I don't know anyone who ever does that... -_-

[harborshore]

GOD THIS IS WONDERFUL. ♥ All of their sharp edges, oh my heart, my girls.

[redbrickrose]

Oh my God, this is perfect. I love Z here, so desperate for change, but so afraid of that one, the understated tension of everything. Gorgeously done.