fic: this one coming

[snakevsladder]

This One Coming
pete/mikey, pete/mikey/gerard
R
~5550 words.

uh, high school au with bonus incest! written for romanticalgirl in the waysplusone exchange.

Comments

[romanticalgirl]

Oh, this is lovely and aching and fabulous. Thank you so much!

[listedheart]

i'm so glad you liked it! :D

[inlovewithnight]

This is so great. ♥ Kind of dreamy and full of possibilities and Pete is so unsure but willing to try. Ahhh. I love it.

He can deal with that kind of raw, uncontrolled anger; he's faced it from his parents, from teachers, from his last ex-girlfriend. Even if he doesn't like it, it's something that makes sense to him.

Oh, PETE.

[listedheart]

thank you! :D

[northernveil]

Awww, so sweet!

[listedheart]

thanks! :D

[turps33]

That was lovely. I really liked that you used Pete's POV and how everything wasn't spelled out, and that he trusted them enough to just go with it.

I like where you ended it too, with that feeling of hope and something new.

[listedheart]

oh man, i'm glad to hear the ending was okay! i realised like halfway through writing it that i had no idea where to actually end it so i just kind of hoped for the best. /o\

[swiiftly]

This was so lovely. ♥ You are super good at small observations about the characters that are very telling, and I love that! Pete's POV was fantastic, it had so much teenage wonder and curiosity.

[listedheart]

thank you! that's so great to hear. :D