for: fifths

Aug 25, 2010 16:14

From: chiyu_85
Title: I’m Your Boyfriend, Not Your Maid!
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Basically: the boys are older (and wiser?) now and have just moved in together. While getting used to each other’s personal habits is going to take a while (i.e. Sasuke has OCD), lots of newlywed-esque honeymooning ensues regardless of the constant bickering (a.k.a. Sasuke’s ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: nc-17, submission: fic

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fifths August 25 2010, 15:45:09 UTC
SLDJHALFKMD I swear I have the biggest smile on my face EVER and I haven't even read this yet /SCREAM GOES TO READ

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Incoherent comment is incoherent fifths August 25 2010, 16:13:03 UTC
I've got one word for you:

HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGG

But seriously, I loved this ;__;♥ The characterizations were perfect, like Naruto's obliviousness and Sasuke's exasperation and and the bickering oh damn the bickering, it was so easy to see them do that! OH AND HI PORN, YOU WERE VERY MUCH APPRECIATED. Shower!sex, Sasuke getting off at seeing himself in the mirror ARE YOU IN MY HEAD OR WHAT D: and you even included Kiba!!

"“I like this living together thing. No one ever barged into my shower begging for sex in my old apartment.” Naruto waggled his eyebrows in a way that really pissed me off." ♥♥♥♥♥♥

THANK YOU~~~!! This was everything I was hoping for, really, and you've made my first LJ exchange experience more than positive ♥

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sirona_gs August 25 2010, 18:26:54 UTC
GOOD GOD. O////O That was quite ridiculously hot. Loved it! And it was funny, too! I LOLd at Sasuke's nicknames for Naruto, and Naruto needling him, and I love how close you've revealed their relationship to be even apart from the sex. Great story!

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kimyag September 20 2010, 20:25:36 UTC
This...was really really great. I LOVED the shower sex. And God I can just imagine Naruto's voice getting all deep and husky during sex. Mmmmm. Freaking hot. And of course it was so awesome to see Sasuke take some control in the bedroom. I think the hottest thing about it was how freaking into Naruto was. None of that bitching and moaning you'll see in other stories about bottoming. Really great and really realistic. Awesome job.

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