for: kitmun

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From: audreytiphaine
Title: Senses Lacking
Rating: PG
Summary: instances in which Sasuke and Naruto meet up. Post-Shippuden
Warnings: None
A/N: Hope this meets with your approval, giftee!
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Comments

[yuuko_uchiha]

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I don't want Sasuke to end up blind ;__;

hahaha XD
great fic! I love the pace and the sensory thing you did here!

[yuuko_uchiha]

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! And I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

[soleil_et_pluie]

Very cool, i liked the lack of each sense in each little snippet. And you do a great sasuke ♥

[soleil_et_pluie]

Thanks! I liked the sense idea, but i wasn't sure that i was going to be able to do it justice!

You liked my Sasuke?! Excellent!

[aamyra]

Oh my god. I love the whole sensory-themed you based on in each part! They worked so well together.

And their relationship went smoothly (in a way) without the whole unnecessary drama (at least not anywhere near to the point of making the readers feel so dfhbgskdfjbhkjstfu already).

The longing in their actions and especially in Sasuke's part were so overwhelming. I could literally see their emotions. And the last part made me both sad and happy. I, too, didn't want Sasuke to lose his eye-sights but it's inevitable.

While Naruto explained, Sasuke savored the feel of Naruto’s warmth pressed up against him. He breathed in his scent: sand and dirt, and that sunshine in his sweat that never seemed to leave him. He let his hand slip onto Naruto’s thigh, feeling the strength there, how tense he was. He listened to Naruto’s voice, the comforting sound of it, how it had stayed relatively high after all these years but still held that rasp that had alternately irritated and turned him on. He stopped several times to swallow past something

[aamyra]

I totally meant to say inside. Sob!

[aamyra]

Thanks for the awesome comment!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR AMAZINGNESS!!

your COMMENT makes me all fuzzy and warm inside!!

<3<3<3

[sirona_gs]

OMG, SO BEAUTIFUL!! ;_____;

I love everything about this. The play on the senses was really very well done, and the progressing in their interaction as their feelings for each other grew and changed, it was masterfully done. That last sentence! ;_______; It's so wonderful they found each other at last! Your way of writing Naruto is brilliant. Loved this story so much!

[sirona_gs]

THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR THE LOVE!! I really really appreciate this comment, it totally made my day! ;_________;

[nilladriel]

You know what? I like this. You have some really amazing descriptions in here, bb, and the sense of character in the narrative is really there. I love the sensory idea too :D (but you already know that.) And I really love the sense of, hm, change? progression? here. ♥

[nilladriel]

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how am i so blessed? SO BLESSED. THANK YOU. LOVE YOU TOO.