For: sn_exchange

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From: zephyras13
Title: After The World Fell Down
Rating: M
Summary: Naruto has been fighting a war for the life of his neighborhood for the past four years, with no end in sight. His world is violent, arbitrary, and ruthless, but it is simple. It makes sense. And then Uchiha Sasuke fucks everything up.
Warnings: Violence, language, nondescript sex, major

Comments

[itzakukulkan]

I really liked your story. You handled very well the plot, the suspense, the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

[eris4]

What a brilliant job.
In the first part the angst was overwhelming, but strangely I couldn't stop the reading, so I went on and on, finding this story more and more interesting. Now I love it ♥
Oh, and I approve of Naruto's decision to move out of Konoha. It was kind of sad; but necessary. It reminds us that killing his friend's killers didn't bring them back.

[kaleidoscope_e]

Wow.

Just... wow. You have managed to capture their characters RIDICULOUSLY well. I started reading this story at midnight (a veeeeery bad idea but I digress) and even though I was sleepy, it woke me right up. There is the perfect amount of action and the plot really flows. I like that their relationship isn't bang bang lets go. I mean, in the beginning perhaps, but it is slow to evolve and that is exactly how I see it happening.

Overall, I loved this and reading it was DEFINITELY worth the bags I'm going to have under my eyes at work tomorrow haha.

[ren421]

Fabulous story; you made me laugh and cry. I do not usually care for non ninjaverse stories, but there are a few authors that do it and do it well. You have joined thier ranks, whoever you are. Fantastic work!