For: orin

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From: atanih88
Title: Pyretos
Rating: NC-17
Summary: "Sasuke came to stand closer. Naruto watched him, taking in the easy strides and the way Sasuke’s face remained devoid of expression as he took in Naruto’s wounds."
Warnings: Violence, explicit adult situations
A/N: Erm. Hi orin, I hope against all odds, that you enjoy this ^^; Dear beta-person, I

Comments

[adistoria]

aslkdajl this was really lovely *_* very well written. I loved your vivid descriptions and how you'd describe scenery, things like the early morning sky and light playing across Sasuke's face and neck? Very beautiful ♥

Naruto smiled again. “Sakura-chan, I never knew you wanted to take advantage of me. It’s okay, I won’t think you’re dirty.”

Favourite line, made me laugh! Actually a lot of things Naruto said made me grin HAHAH XDDD also also also the sex had me like this:

o_o

O_O

O_O

I also really liked how the whole of Team 7 were on a mission together, and that Sakura was portrayed so brilliantly. It's really great to see someone do justice to her character. And ditto for scenes with Tsunade, I think she's secretly become one of my favourite characters without me realising, but you wrote her well :D I liked:

Then they’d abandoned him in a room with Tsunade and beaten it out of there as soon as Naruto’s ass had hit the hospital bed. Assholes both of them.

and loved:

Sakura called it tough love. Naruto just called it

[gonrie]

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I so freaking *loved this* ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I think I know who you are but I won't spoil everyone else XD

Your porn? = WIN
Your IC? = WIN
YOU? = WIN WIN WIN WIN WIN

Basically, this was the cherry on the top of the cake :DD

[gonrie]

Well, it absolutely was that awesome!
I'll look forward to more of your entries :)

[indira14]

This was probably supposed to be serious and casual and calming, and it was serious and casual and calming, but... it probably wasn't supposed to make me smile so much!

I love how this was written - you know when something is written in a way that you can't help but like it? Yes, that's what I'm walking about. There was something very fluid and effortless and, uh, serene about the descriptions and I think I've fallen in love with how you describe snatches of light in between trees. Strange thing to notice, but meh.

And this:
Naruto sent a disgusted look his way. Some people had no shame. - Oh Naruto, were you talking about yourself? <333

And-And! I won't say anything about the porn except it was *_______* and it felt so real~~!

A lovely job with this - oh, and I really loved the way you've written Sasuke and Sakura here. ♥

[sowell]

Oh wow, I really loved this. The dynamic between the three of them came through in every single interaction. I loved Naruto's insecurity about Sasuke and Sasuke's typical stoicism and how mature and freaking awesome Sakura was at every moment. Sasuke taking care of Naruto was sweet and the sex was incredibly hot and the ending made me smile. I ADORE THIS.

[audreytiphaine]

this... was so fantastic. SO FANTASTIC. i agree with what everyone is saying here, the sex, the IC, and SUCH A PERFECT ENDING. LOVELY.