For: _emewd_

Aug 22, 2010 16:38

From: princess_emmi
Title: Distractions
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Not all people are equal in any level of their lives and sometimes the only person you can count on is someone who has lived the same life as you- someone who has felt the same feelings and the same fears.
Warnings: AU, slight bondage, adultery, sex and mentions of violence.
A/N: I did my best to ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: nc-17, submission: fic

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n_anon August 22 2010, 16:24:36 UTC
wow, this story made me feel like a voyeur during the sex scene. it was so intense and private, it felt almost wrong to look in, lol. Loved the way you wrote them both and what i love even more is that you managed to convey their relationship with such little conversation between them. i thought that was brilliantly done, the way they didnt need many words to understand each other.

I feel a bit bad for their wives, but holy hell, this was amazing!

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princess_emmi September 5 2010, 18:00:06 UTC
Yeah, I felt a little bad for their wives, too, and that was mostly why I left them nameless.

Thanks so much for your comment, I really appreciate it :D

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rosalui August 22 2010, 20:32:52 UTC
Hot. Hot and intense and private.

“How did you make it stop?”

....

“You find something to replace them with.”

AHHHHH. I feel like this says so much about them. :')

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princess_emmi September 5 2010, 17:59:35 UTC
XDD THANKS! I'm glad that you enjoyed that line as much as me!

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yuuko_uchiha August 23 2010, 05:00:10 UTC
I don't know what to say XD
haha, this feel, honestly? like I'm intruding hehe :D I liked it -of course- it's just that~ yeah, I feel like I shouldn't be here, I loved how they understood the other, so perfectly, in a way it makes me glad they got the other.

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princess_emmi September 5 2010, 17:59:14 UTC
Thank you! At least... xD I hope that it's a good thing if you feel as though you're intruding, haha.

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belledragon August 25 2010, 04:41:08 UTC
I really liked this - it was so personal and intimate and it was so clear they were something entirely separate and 'more' to each other than anyone else ever could be. They have the best of two world's in this scenario - they're families and each other.

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princess_emmi September 5 2010, 17:58:42 UTC
;; Baw, thanks so much for your comment! I worked hard on it and I'm glad that everyone seems to think that I managed to get the personal aspect of their relationship that I was working towards!

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pugsong1a12 August 26 2010, 04:04:45 UTC
I am the person formerly known as _emewd_ (and I can prove it if needed!).

I LOVED THIS! IT IS SO AWESOME. Thank you so much! Okay, I'm so excited over it that anything else I type is going to end in exclamation points. It's beautiful, and wonderful and--yeah. I like it a lot! Thank you.

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princess_emmi September 5 2010, 17:58:00 UTC
Haha, you totally don't have to prove it, I believe you!

I'm glad that you really liked it! I was very worried while I was writing it that it was something that might not have filled enough of your kinks or your requests and I went WAY AU XD But I'm very glad :3

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