for: octavius_x

Aug 20, 2010 20:56

From: oceansex
Title: Attachments
Rating: NC-17
Summary: No one suspects that his aim to get back to Sasuke is anything more than sheer stubbornness. But it is more than that, and it has been since that night he spent with a girl in a brothel, wishing she was Sasuke.
Warnings: Gratuitous musings on sex. Mentions of het sex. Masturbation. Man-on-man sex. ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: nc-17, submission: fic

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octavius_x August 21 2010, 03:11:48 UTC
Awwww awesome sex & friendship are really how the series should end. This is exactly how I imagined a "Growing up parallel" story, the slow realization and aging and retribution. My favorite scene was with Sakura-chan, Naruto and Sai (esp. Sakura's line about lesbian fantasies); it seemed very in keeping with how they are in the series. More than that though, there's def. a longing about Naruto in this story, and also a little self-deprecation at him being a jinchuuriki that I loved that you brought up, also the heardstrong clumsiness, and also the back and forth of the dialogue, and you know...all the sex. <3 THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

I can't wait to find out who you are!

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furuyakeifu August 22 2010, 04:31:14 UTC
This feels so canon, esp the personalities. I love your story!
I really like the way Naruto says "I love you" with the "okay" XD
Nice job with the time/event spacing too!

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sirona_gs August 25 2010, 16:22:28 UTC
So hot! But more than that, I loved the emotions that you pulled out of them. Sasuke being in lover with Naruto and not realising, and Naruto's self-hatred, that no one will want to have sex with a monster, and his realisation in the end... Wonderful! I really enjoyed this!

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questofdreams August 26 2010, 18:34:57 UTC
This was a really lovely read. Naruto's conversation with Sakura, and then Sai and Yamato, was great. And his reconciliation with Sasuke was both hot and really achingly sweet.

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shinigami002 August 31 2010, 04:57:12 UTC
"Who knew all it took to snap you out of your crazy was to get you laid."

Oh Naruto. Tactful as always :P

Great read. Now it needs to be canon.

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