for: questofdreams

Aug 19, 2010 15:31

From: kodak_85
Title: Deliverance
Rating: R
Summary: Sasuke had a secret friend that no one could know about.
Warnings: Abuse, language, implied sex
A/N: You asked for supernatural that wasn’t overdone, angst, and a happy ending. I hope I delivered! Please enjoy!
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summer 2010, rating: r, submission: fic

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gonrie August 19 2010, 15:48:43 UTC
I found this really original! :)
Good job ^^

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questofdreams August 19 2010, 17:05:03 UTC
Naruto was great in this fic. I loved their birthday/halloween escapades. All of their interaction was both sweet and funny and painful. The ending broke my heart, but the scene with Sakura fit it back together again. You have a really nice writing style, one that's straight forward and evocative. I really like it. Thank you for this ♥

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aamyra August 19 2010, 18:06:34 UTC
I agree with everyone, the last scene with Sakura succored me a lot. I'm happy to see Sasuke finally freed from that destroyed family environment. It's ironic that he started to live after his death, but it's oddly proper. I fell in love with this fanfiction after this line: After all, Naruto was the one who was see-through.

I have so much love for Naruto, how he did everything he could to make life itself better for Sasuke. And fireun basically said it all with this line: You wrote it so well it was honestly hard to get worked up over Sasuke's home situation- I was too focused on how Naruto worked to soothe over everything for Sasuke, and how wonderful their interaction was.

That was just amazing, everything. I'm so glad for the ending. Thank you for not making me weep in sadness. Hehe. Great job!

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savagelullabies August 20 2010, 16:58:38 UTC
This broke my heart into little pieces. It was written so well and I can hardly find the words to express how deeply this touched me. I love imaginary friend fics, and have read my fair share, but this one takes the cake and eats it! Sakura's part at the end gave the story the closure it needed after that amazing and heart twisting climax. ADSFGHSFH~! I loved it.

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rosalui August 21 2010, 20:52:48 UTC
Oh, wow. Just wow.

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