For: rinjin07

Aug 28, 2009 21:09

For: rinjin07
Title: Feels Like Walking on Water
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Naruto doesn't take Sasuke's plans as well as a friend should've.
Warnings: Explicit sexual situations
A/N: Hello there rinjin07! Erm, I apologise for how this turned into a friggin monster-it truly was, unintentional! I hope you still enjoy it and that I have done your prompts justice : ) ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, summer 2009, submission: fic

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th0rns_n_r0ses August 29 2009, 02:46:01 UTC
Oh...wow. That was really, really good. And I loved the Kakashi/Sakura hints. I've read a lot of what's been posted for this exchange, and this was one of my favorites.

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kumo August 29 2009, 04:24:31 UTC
I love this. Really, really. Especially the way grown-up team 7's interaction is depicted. Oh, and having a wife candidate for Sasuke who's not a complete filler character is quite refreshing. :3

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<333333 rinjin07 August 29 2009, 08:52:00 UTC
OOOH FIRST COMMENT PLZ

awww i loved itttttt <333333 thank you so much, i lovelove naruto angst XD he's so cute when he's miserable hahaha. you write them amazingly in character as well which is so awesommme <333 thankyouthankyouthankyouuu cant say it enough times XD ending was so cute as well, it just perfectly represents their sure to be love-hate relationship XDD

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Re: <333333 rinjin07 August 29 2009, 08:52:44 UTC
ohshit, i didnt see the other comments til i posted mine D'X I GUESS I HAVE TO SETTLE FOR FIFTH ='

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Re: &lt;333333 rinjin07 September 2 2009, 06:45:46 UTC
oh heyyy i didnt mind the kakasaku at all! it actually added a really nice touch cus i absolutely cant stand fics where EVERYONE is gay XDD

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shinigami39 August 31 2009, 08:21:51 UTC
*flails* *tries to compose self* *flails some more*

AFAFDJGSGSKGAHA

This fic is so wonderful and the characterizations, the humor, ajkgkkghdakfa YESSS.♥

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geekgirl62 August 31 2009, 20:08:44 UTC
Loved it! Beautifully written. Loved the water imagery you used which always seemed to surround Naruto. They way their relationship progressed was perfect, slow not too fast. KakaSaku was a nice plus.

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