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Aug 26, 2009 14:30

For: ilandere123
Title: Last Cross
Rating: R
Summary: A serial killer is on the loose and Naruto is sent to guard one of the possible targets, Sasuke. As KIRA's victims increase, Naruto discovers the lies that surround this case and that Sasuke is not who he seems to be…
Warnings: Possible dub-con (?), violence (there is a serial killer after all),
A/N: I ( Read more... )

rating: r, summer 2009, submission: fic

Comments 14

pervert_bitch August 26 2009, 16:35:02 UTC

YES. YES. YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!
Man, I love mysteries even if I totally knew who was KIRA but still, MINDFUCKINGTASTIC XD

shinigami39 September 3 2009, 06:54:50 UTC

I was going for mindfuck with some sexytiems plus more mindfuck, so I'm glad for your review XDDD

sowell August 26 2009, 20:45:12 UTC

Whoa, that was dark. I really liked the conspiracy you built up, and Sasuke was very effectively creepy. Nice job!

shinigami39 September 3 2009, 06:55:52 UTC

Hehe thank you! ♥ I was a bit unsure of this, but I'm glad it worked out nicely :D

whitedestiny1x2 August 27 2009, 01:57:17 UTC

...Wow. This is a mind trip like none other. Dark and well-crafted. Damn. I'm still feeling the aftershocks. Seriously, I can't stop replaying this fic in my mind. Wonderful work, author.

shinigami39 September 3 2009, 06:56:48 UTC

Thank you! :D I was hoping for this kind of reaction while I wrote the fic, so I'm pleased to hear(read?) your comment! ♥

kodak_85 August 27 2009, 21:45:40 UTC

This was excellent. I thought the killer might have been Sasuke when I read the summary, but the story lead you to believe he wasn't, and it was still surprising in the end. I'll definitely be reading it again. Great job!

shinigami39 September 3 2009, 06:58:30 UTC

Haha, I think nobody was surprised when Sasuke was the killer in the end 8D But thank you so much reading and for your comment! ♥

ilandere123 August 30 2009, 19:25:45 UTC

Woooowwww!
Thank you thank you thank you so much!! *u* ♥♥♥♥♥
I loved the twist at the end. Everything about it was perfect. (and the nurse outfit thing, lolll)
Your epic fail was most definitely epic win in my eyes.
My request was difficult, but man you pulled it off so well! Thanks again! I'm so happy with my gift ;u; <3333

shinigami39 September 3 2009, 06:53:28 UTC

♥!

Heyyyy~

Thank you for such kind words! ♥ I have to admit, this is far from what I usually write, but your prompts were very interesting and challenging and I had tons of fun writing this XD

I'm really glad that you liked this! Maybe it wasn't so epic fail after all haha 8D