Rhoswen and The Avatars

[smsues]

Title: The Avatars
Writer: Warrior of Ice
Summary: “The King of the Winds and his four winds begin a doomed romance with five mortals who are the chosen avatars of five very powerful deities. Love blossoms before identites are revealed, but its petals may wither to dust in the face of powerful opposition.”
Canon: AU
Rating: 4

Name: Serenity/

Comments

[tsubomi]

Sub and dub names... mixing makes me want to smack someone.

[sailormac]

The concept of the Senshi as the representatives of various gods on earth is actually a good one -- as long as it's about *Senshi*. These people don't even have the *names* of Sailor Moon characters.

[shamans_weapon]

What the farking hell?! Just what has THIS gotta do with sailor moon?!

[selene_moon]

Granted, I didn't read enough of the fic to see if it fits a least a little closer to a Sailor Moon storyline than the first part, but the first part, with the explanations and all, is actually a cool read. Would work better as original fiction, as you said, but I can still see it's Sailor Moon roots.

Plus, I'm jealous right now because it's rather well-written.

[minilovely]

I think it's funny how all the avatars correspond to their senshi titles... except Mercury*. Is Hermes not good enough for this fic or something?

*Excluding Moon, of course, and even then Artemis is often associated with the moon, so.

[minilovely]

Also:

Treatment of the avatars was also supposed to be closely monitored: no physical violence, no verbal abuse, and no rape. [“That includes means you, Zeus.”]

That made me giggle. I'm glad I wasn't drinking anything at the time-- my keyboard doesn't need a soda bath right now XD