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Elena Bruggman (Sailor Crescent Moon) and The Sailor Guardians

Apr 02, 2006 11:04

Did everyone have a nice April Fools Day? I failed in my attempt to not fall for a prank. (The Homestar Runner Wiki's got me. :\)

Today's author has also participated in some fandubs. You can check them out here.

This is a long one, so brace yourselves.

Title: Sailor Guardians
Writer: Kaitou Riku
Canon: Dubbed anime
Rating: 3

Name: ( Read more... )

new/exchange/transfer students, endymion's cousin, 3, dead/missing/abusive parent(s), princess pluto's sister, princess mars' sister, princess neptune's sister, princess serenity's sister, odangos, silver crystal clone, zodiac, princess venus' sister, alternate, princess mercury's sister, princess saturn's sister, princess uranus' sister, princess jupiter's sister

Comments 8

minilovely April 2 2006, 19:53:36 UTC

WRYYYYYY *collapses*

Thia story makes me feel strangely murderous. I don't even know what pisses me off so much about it, which is really strange. Maybe it has to do with the combined suck of the writing style and overall plot. And the blatant ripping off of previous villains and plots. And the fact that no one has a personality. And... Wow, I could keep going for a while.

Well, damn. Now I want to try to write a Zodiac Senshi story, and do it write. It's crap like this that has totally ruined a concept with a lot of potential.

smsues April 4 2006, 00:11:38 UTC

If you do, make sure you have a Sailor Orphiuchus. That's the 13th zodiac sign. A lot of people forget it. Which is surprising since it would fit the bill if they wanted to make one senshi that was more powerful and important than the others.

minilovely April 4 2006, 23:21:19 UTC

I actually fall into the Orphichus category =D I haven't really done any research into it other than what I read briefly, though. Now I want to go do that. Curse you, internet, and your ability to spawn random plotbunnies I have no time to follow through on! Curse you!

selene_moon April 3 2006, 14:51:27 UTC

Woah, and ouch. You are one dedicated sporker to be able to sit through all that. I can never report anything more than 3 chapters long, it just hurts too much to read more.

smsues April 4 2006, 00:09:05 UTC

I have a high tolerance for crap like this. Though, this was still painful. It was so boring. :\

raspberry_baby April 4 2006, 05:10:12 UTC

That's just painful.

hempfandango April 4 2006, 15:10:51 UTC

Ahhh yes, I recognize this author. I once tried to struggle through her next gen fic before giving up in disgust. In that fic, all of the Next Gen Senshi were rip-offs of the previous Senshi. (i.e. Mini Sailor Mercury was a rip-off of the original Sailor Mars, right down to the hair style and fire scrying, while Mini Sailor Mars was a rip-off of original Sailor Mercury, etc.) I gave up around chapter fifteen, when there was about 30+ senshi and some generals/generic love interests. I nearly went insane trying to read it, so I feel your pain.

rising_dreamer April 4 2006, 21:12:34 UTC

I hope that I'm not sounding unpolite or something.

I like the idea of Zodiac Senshi as well. I tried writing a Zodiac Senshi story once... It was pretty lame, though.

Now I want to put Zodiac Senshi on a story that I'm starting to write...

But the Oppositio Senshi are already on it, and more twelve warriors... Nah... Unless... *Kicks herself* No, no, no. Don't even dare thinking about this, rising_dreamer. If you want the Zodiac Senshi to be on a story of yours, write another one.

About these sues... MY EYES, MY EYES, MOMEE, THEY BURN! THEY BURRRRN! I mean... That's a lot of bad sues. And the story... Boring.