A Deeper Instinct, a gift for dellafiamma

Dec 30, 2010 14:56

Mod's Note: This is our last story in the exchange. A big thank-you to everyone who participated, especially those who wrote pinch-hits for us! You all made the task of being a mod very enjoyable.

Recipient: dellafiamma
Title: A Deeper Instinct
Author: drcjsnider
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2261
Summary: When Rose agreed to be Scorpius Malfoy’s solicitor she opened ( Read more... )

author: drcjsnider, rating: pg

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ashleyfanfic December 30 2010, 20:10:08 UTC
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!

Specifically, this:
Rose laughed. “It’s too early to know. I warn you, however, that I’m in pursuit of a really good orgasm.”

“Me too! One more thing we have in common,” he said before pulling her back into his arms and kissed her like he was certain he could give her everything she’d ever thought she’d wanted.

I cackled when I read it, just fyi!

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drcjsnider January 2 2011, 05:37:17 UTC
Oh thank you!! I figure Rose isn't the type of girl to play coy with a man she likes :)

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mollywheezy December 30 2010, 20:52:09 UTC
Brilliant! :D

I loved that Rose and Scorpius prevented an elderly woman from being evicted. Awwwww!

“You’ve got what? A cramp? Dinner?”
I completely LOLed at this line--it sounds so much like my husband's sense of humor. ;)

Ian McMillan! Yuck! I think I went out with him once . . .

Adored the ending. *hugs Scorpius for being made of awesome*

Great story! I was having a cruddy day, but feel much better after reading this twice. ;D *HUGS*

And thanks for modding such a great fest! :D

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drcjsnider January 2 2011, 05:39:07 UTC
Oh... I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yeah... Ian came off being MUCH MORE of a jerk than I first intended, but hey... it's all in pursuit of making her fall for scorpius so its good stuff!!

Thank YOU a ton for participating in the fest, you were SOOOOO easy to work with :)

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rose_starr December 30 2010, 23:40:55 UTC
This is so much fun!! I absolutely adore Rose and was cringing with her during her conversations with Ian MacMillan [LOVED her line to him about asking for her dad's permission!!]

And Scorpius is such an ass but you can't help liking him, especially when he has Rose help him do things to help out those less fortunate.

Great fic, as always!!! ♥

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drcjsnider January 2 2011, 05:40:32 UTC
You are a doll for helping me out with the last minute beta!!!

Yeah... scorpius came off a little more like Draco than I usual write him, but I love that he had this agenda to help the magical underclasses.... I would love to pursue this idea at some point, of course, i have tons of ideas i would love to pursue at some point!

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rose_starr January 2 2011, 05:44:09 UTC
Take your time and write them all - we'll be here to read them! :)

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dellafiamma December 31 2010, 17:39:08 UTC
SO AWESOME! Loving how he's still a haughty Malfoy whilst being a sweetheart and helping people. I always felt she'd need a man that respected her and understood that she was more than capable. Plus, IT'S YOU! I am rather blessed to have gotten one of my favorite fic authors! Yay! Thanks so much I absolutely love it and theirs discourse is practically perfect.<3

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drcjsnider January 2 2011, 05:41:41 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was a real blast to write and the prompts you gave were just GREAT. This is one of the first times that I've written Scorpius as being pretty Draco like in attitude... although not in essentials!

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tigersroar January 2 2011, 13:47:14 UTC
I would really love to write you a deatiled comment about everything I enjoyed about this - but there's too much to say and all my mind is saying at the moment is "WOW!"

This was great, I loved every second of it. The characters and the details were spot on, and the tone and your writing style was fantastic!

What a great quote to work with as well! You really did a great job!

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drcjsnider January 3 2011, 03:25:37 UTC
You are a total sweetheart!!! Really the quote gave me all the inspiration, without it I never would have thought of going in this direction... thank you so much for reading/review :)

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