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We Stand and Face the Storm (PG-13) 1/2

Oct 24, 2011 07:18

Title: We Stand and Face the Storm (1/2)

Author: realmer06

Prompt: "I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best- Marilyn Monroe"

Summary: With gray eyes the color of thunderclouds and a temper to ( Read more... )

round four, pg-13, fic, author:realmer06

Comments 4

copper_season October 24 2011, 16:35:07 UTC

That was so good! I'm looking forward to the next part and can't wait to see what happens.

I love how you wrote Hugo and Rose. Hugo's willingness to be in the shadows so that Rose could shine. Rose's competitiveness and her love for Hugo shine through.

I even winced at the set down Scorpius gave Rose. Dang! LOL. But it was needed and it turned things around.

i_am_girlfriday October 25 2011, 05:50:37 UTC

Aaaaaaaahhhh!!!!! I love the start to this, and Hugo as the narrator is wonderful!!! Can't wai to read part 2!

drcjsnider October 27 2011, 18:42:12 UTC

Oh... sooooo good so far. I'm really enjoying this Hugo is a delight, I really like both Rose and Scorpius and I'm dying to know why Scorpius stormed into WWW, too!

mollywheezy October 28 2011, 18:20:45 UTC

I adore Hugo in this--I've never seen Hugo as the narrator of a Rose/Scorpius story, and it's brilliant! I am really enjoying Hugo and Rose's relationship, especially their habit of dancing in the rain!

ROTFL at Hugo's conversation with Fred's portrait. I LOVE Fred and George and this was a great way to get both of them in the story. ;)