We Stand and Face the Storm (PG-13) 2/2

Oct 24, 2011 07:18

Title: We Stand and Face the Storm (2/2)

Author: realmer06

Prompt: "I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best- Marilyn Monroe"

Summary: With gray eyes the color of thunderclouds and a temper to ( Read more... )

round four, pg-13, fic, author:realmer06

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enchantedteapot October 24 2011, 16:16:51 UTC
I thought this was just brilliant! What a wonderful way to tell the story- Hugo is just such a sweetheart too! The relationship between Rose and Scorpius and it's development was very well written and went at a nice, steady pace. I could completely believe Scorpius' anger at his master plan being ruined when she didn't make Head-Girl.

And of course, I loved the use of Fred's portrait. A wonderful touch! Great read.

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copper_season October 24 2011, 16:51:40 UTC
I knew I'd love the second part too. Wonderful!

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shiv5468 October 24 2011, 21:55:44 UTC
HUgo's viewpoint gives an interesting neutrality to the story, seeing both Scorpius and Rose equeally

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makoshark8 October 24 2011, 23:37:32 UTC
Great story! At first I had thought that they had only posted the first half of your story and so I was like "Noooooo!" but then I saw the second half and was very relieved. I really liked the way you used Hugo in the fic to tell the story, it is always interesting to see Rose and Scorpius from a different perspective.

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cyyt October 25 2011, 12:02:08 UTC
BRILLIANT.

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