"Facets" - A Gift for anysomething

Jul 28, 2010 14:20

Title: Facets
Author: realmer06
Gift For: anysomething
Summary: Rose is a writer. Scorpius is a photographer. And that influences how they view both the world and each other. There's is a story for the ages, if they can only figure out how to tell it.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Word Count: (if applicable) 10,500 (I know; it's a monster!)
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fic, rating:pg, round three, author:realmer06

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nejna July 29 2010, 19:27:00 UTC
Amazing story, I just love the way you skipped from one POV to another, and you somehow accomplished with two different stiles of narrating, with just use of words and pictures painted in story, to give unique separate voices to Scorpius and Rose.

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missdagane July 30 2010, 10:14:31 UTC
I loved it: the way you use two habits of each of the (writing and taking pictures) to describe their story was really original. And the end was really amazing.

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mollywheezy July 30 2010, 22:17:55 UTC
First of all, I was squeeing right from the start because Rose and Scorpius share my anniversary. LOL ;D

I absolutely loved this! MY favorite detail was that Rose didn't write down the story of her "falling in love" conversation with Scorpius. That really fits me. I journaled all through college until I began dating my now husband--I was too busy having fun to bother to write about it.

I loved Scorpius' saying "You never forget your first". You used that line in such an original way. I also thought Draco's tirade was particularly apt, and loved that Hermione gave it first.

I really enjoyed your format for the story and how the format fit your characterizations of Rose and Scorpius so well.

Absolutely brilliant! :D

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bambu345 August 1 2010, 19:12:05 UTC
This was thought-provoking, charming, and a story I will undoubtedly re-read from time-to-time. Rose's denial was revealed believably, and her epiphany was cleverly done as the denouement of your piece.

Thank you very much.

Oh, and a hearty congratulations for having Hermione stand up for what she believes in!

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adjennaline December 12 2010, 02:49:26 UTC
"I can’t tell you that I’m not in love with you, Rose, because you hate it when people lie to you."

The words "I love you" have been repeated so many times in everyday life and especially in fanfiction that the words lose some of their meaning. Congrats on conveying that monumentous original meaning in this line...I'd tell you I hate it but I wouldn't want to lie.

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