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"I Wanna Be With You" - A Gift for the Community

Jul 24, 2010 11:56

Title: I Wanna Be With You
Author: ashleyfanfic
Gift For: Community
Summary: Rose has big plans for Scorpius after James Potter’s wedding
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: just some sex…
Word Count: 4609
Lyrics/Quotes Used:I try but I cant seem to get myself to think of ( Read more... )

author:ashleyfanfic, rating:nc-17, fic, round three

Comments 7

drcjsnider July 24 2010, 18:24:59 UTC

Very well done! Attending a wedding with someone can always be a bit daunting, especially when there is back history of one kind or another to deal with. I thought you handled the emotions/reactions of Ron/Hermione really well. No one was over the top in their responses to Scorpius and Rose dating - sure they showed some concern, but that was to be expected. I think my favorite parts, however, were some of the one liners like about Hugo being found passed out with his trousers down, or Al teasing Scorpius to play hard to get. This was an enjoyable read! :)

mollywheezy July 24 2010, 20:36:49 UTC

I liked your humor in this, especially regarding Ron and Hermione's reactions. “Mrs. Weasley, is your husband going to kill me?” LOL

Very well-written story--I didn't want it to end! ;)

princessgilly July 26 2010, 12:15:53 UTC

I loved Hermione. especially the "Never speak badly about the Canons." that was awesome

i_am_girlfriday July 26 2010, 13:50:17 UTC

This was wonderful! Very romantic. I loved the dialog between Hermione and Scorpius. I always love friends to lovers type stories.

incandescent July 27 2010, 02:36:55 UTC

Very nice. I loved seeing Ron's reaction to Rose and Scorpius' relationship. It was so interesting. And your descriptions were so beautiful. Great job.