"Third Time's Not Always A Charm" - A Gift for drcjsnider

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Title: Third's Not Always a Charm
Author: rosivan
Gift for: drcjsnider
Summary: Scorpius loses his memories working on a potion, and Rose is there to help him until they come back.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: ~5100
Author's Note: I tried to write something different for these two, as requested, and I hope you enjoy it~ It's less about Quidditch than I

Comments

[shiiki]

Oh! Beautifully done, mystery author! I loved the bit-by-bit revelation of how Scorpius had got this way. It kept me hooked all the way to the end!

[princessgilly]

I loved this. Such and interesting and original take and so well written!

[drcjsnider]

I'm so sorry I didn't respond to this yesterday! I read it at work and wanted to have time to formulate a comment but then lost power last night!!! So Fail for me!

However, I just loved this story. In definitely is something new and innovative. I enjoyed having Rose and Scorpius already together, although Scorpius can't remember anything - but feels he loves her. That part is just amazing. I also liked the relationship you portrayed between Draco and Scorpius with all its subtexts and hidden meanings... things that Scorpius couldn't really understand without his memories. The ending was amazing... Rose hitting him and him knowing right away WHY! hehe... and the VERY end when he talks about how he loves how straight forward she is and how strong his feelings are for now that his memories are back. Wonderful story. Seriously good stuff! Thanks so much for writing it!

[lachambre11]

This story was pretty great. I loved the way Scorpius feelings still lingered, even though he couldn't remember. I love the way Rose helped him, and, of course, how she reacted once he got his memory back. The story with his mother was a very interesting twist, and the relationships between the Malfoys were actually deeply in character from what I've gathered from reading the books.

=D