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"Like Father, Like Son" - A Gift for sophia_weasley

Aug 13, 2009 05:40

Title: Like Father, Like Son
Author: ladyshina
Gift For: Sophia_weasley
Summary: Draco doesn't suspect an ulterior motive when Scorpius comes to him on a rainy summer afternoon and says, "Father, will you and Mother be free the first week of July?"
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2100 words
Author's Note: Many thanks to A., my beta-reader. Sophia, I hope you'll enjoy this! :)

( Like Father, Like Son )

round two, author:ladyshina, fic, rating:pg

Comments 10

drcjsnider August 13 2009, 12:31:55 UTC

Nice look at rose/scorpius through Draco's eyes. I really like this image of scorpius, too... rather quite and perhaps a bit introverted... he seems to take after Draco quite a bit. The hints of Draco/Astoria's relationship and how Scorpius and rose's mirrors it some ways was really lovely. Very nice job! I reallye enjoyed it.

doctoraicha August 13 2009, 12:41:09 UTC

Lovely. But in July, it's cold in Australia. You wouldn't want to lay on the beach or go swimming.

mollywheezy August 13 2009, 13:05:00 UTC

Loved this! I thought your characterization of Draco was excellent--still the snarky Slytherin, but he's grown up and obviously loves his wife and son. I really loved the conversation between Draco and Rose! Great job! :)

realmer06 August 13 2009, 15:06:31 UTC

Oh, this was great fun! But then, I'm a sucker for these kinds of stories. I love the parallels, and I love how Draco has both changed and not changed, as evidence by that last, brilliant, line. Nice use of present tense as well. It really worked for this story.

Overall, very well done! Thank you for sharing!

star54kar August 13 2009, 18:25:42 UTC

This was great fun and really sweet!

Lovely job!